The Girl and Her Whale(Completed)
Self-Published
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Description
Jenessa has always loved Killer Whales and only days before she goes to college she gets special access to see all the Killer Whales at an aquarium. Just before the end of her backstage tour, she gets to met a whale named Agent. Agent was know for being mischievous and not listening. But when Jenessa meets him both of their world's will be changed forever.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Sarah
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 12,407
Chapters(13 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The story opens with Jenessa who meets a rather sour whale named Agent and it ultimately leads to her finding romance in this sweet love story. No, not with Agent! The first half of the story is written with a handful of errors in prose, but it had a lot more care and time dedicated to building the relationship. By the end, we are getting jumps and skips with pivotal life moments. This leads for a rather unsatisfactory ending because it is told, not experienced by the reader. It could use a little expansion and a copyedit, but otherwise it is good.