The Ghoul Queen
Self-Published
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Description
A man that wanted to go out and have a nice evening in a local tavern got bewitched by a beauty he never saw before. What he thought was gonna be the best night in his life turned out to be the worst nightmare as he got drugged by the same beauty only to wake up being dragged by strange black-clothed men and be chained to a chair as they inject him with strange liquid is there salvation?
AN: Synopsis need's a little work ^^
PS: I don't own the pic.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- DelioMal
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 312
- Views
- 35,958
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(5)
- DragonightmareRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I love storys with non human or monstres main cherectors this one is particularly fun mostly because how you make the creatures seem a little human (the small female ghoul) and inhumane at the same time i cant wait to see how the mc changes and evolves how much of her will remain human and how much of her is twisted by her new found nature and situation i also really love the design of them they make me think of an uglier version of the monster from the movie splice exept for the mc but that will just make it fun when she interacts with humans in the future
- SovietWeebRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Oh, how I am loving this story. Things such as this already being a fantasy world and the good story structure is just so good.
Normally you always see isekai stories. It gets really tedious how some human from Earth always goes through the same things and somehow is able to cope really well. It's really refreshing to see it in the same world and makes sense why the MC was able to adapt the way they did.
The Grammar and the way the story is told is good and I rarely found grammatical issues. I never felt that it's too fast paced or too slow. It keeps a nice line between them. I like what I am hearing about other parts of the world and the start set's up an interesting overall plot of revenge for the MC ( Same time I don't want the MC to kill the women because of Yuri reasons!) I do kind of hope we get the structure of this world explained more, Cause as of now, I feel like this world is really small and everything is within a stones throw away.
I love imagining the MC looking like the picture, Although with less deformed facial features. But things like the Spiky spine and tail along with limbs.
The relationship between the bullied girl at the start and the MC I see being kind of adorable in that the bullied girl has a giant crush and acts like a pet to the MC. I do kind of wish we were able to get a POV of the Bullied girl as she changes from the shy and bullied girl into the ferocious killer.
I do hope this story picks up again. I can see how great this story can become and it also helps that this is a type of I've been wanting and what I love - KO_KingRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0dont stop, this is a good one!
use commas, and full stops more often. otherwise exellent start author keep up the good work. - Wyvernwolf52Royal Road★★★★ 4.0The story is interesting waiting for more.
- JoaryRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5is good, please come back. ...................................comeback