The Genius Manipulator

Self-Published

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Description

A high schooler, Kastille, who deems himself as a genius manipulator, is planning on creating his own kingdom. By manipulating the students to his will, he has nearly taken control of the entire school. Through his own skills and talents, he blackmails, coerces, extorts, and uses anyone and anything in order to get his goal in life: to be able to live without hardship after he graduates by receiving the fruit of the labor from the people under his control.

Will he triumph and live a life of luxury or will he see his empire burn to ashes?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
ert

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.8/ 5.0
Followers
4
Views
12,735

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • EnhozRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Why,that's my only question.I can see that you are trying to do something original,it ain't gonna work hun,a GENIUS MANIPULATOR with the whole school at his fingertip,lost a match of chess againts the stundent council president(keep in mind he's a CHAMPION at chess,he beat her in the torunament) and became her SLAVE,exams coming up in 2 weeks and he's stuck doing chores bro,chores.The characters are like 2D cut outs,a single trait can describe them.President and her bitch crew-Bitches;MC-Retard supposedly genius ; Mia-stupid airhead , and the rest don't appear more than 2 times.I'm not that good at english,i can't find faults.Style aswell,i'm not advanced enough to give criticism but just for shits and giggles i rated 4:50.Author,it's your story,your choice but noone will want to read a story about a supposely genius manipulator being a slave(ironic) and i don't see him doing anything at this point.You should've used the council president as a stepping stone by getting rid of her in like 5 chaps to prepare something grand like world conquering , BUUUUUUUUUUTTTTT NOOOOOOOOO he will probably stay a slave until the author decides to drop this.At it's current phase i don't recomend it.DON'T PUT YOUR FAITH IN THIS REVIEW,GO AND READ IT YOURSELF,BUT I CAN TELL YOU THAT IT'S NOT WORTH AT IT'S CURRENT POINT.if the author pulls some magic out of his ass andmakes the MC  suceed at controlling some big shot(and as a coincidence that big shot was the council president's father/mother)  thorught a lucky blackmailing opportunity,and after we see the council's presiden't despair and agony as he destroys their family,then yes it MIGHT be a good story.