The Gates of Hell
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Waking up from sleep, a strange door appears in your home ...... Behind each door is a strange world. In the nightmare world, Aoiz added the news he got from the strong man to the fat man, listening to the latter almost cried out, "Here...
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- ARIZZ
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 2,032
Chapters(11 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Lin WeiminRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5With a few exceptions I found this to be a strong first chapter! The setup was great, and I can't wait to read your other chapters. Some small changes I'd suggest: I had trouble following who was speaking after a while, having some indication of who is saying what along 20 lines of dialogue would help. Also give more description about the door if you can.
Best of luck on your future work