The Game of Evolution

Self-Published

Description

Jack Darwin and 9 other candidates are taken from earth and have been chosen to compete in The Game of Evolution.

In which each candidate gets a choice of 1 prime race and 2 minor races to control,command, and evolve.

The candidate will all be on the same planet of ludum mundi and will have to fight to survive against the other contestants and the world itself.

(Had this idea in my mind thought I'd try it out)

This is also on webnovel under the same name and profile.

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NvRMnD436Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The novel kept me for 3 days... maan the novel is too great besides the typos, and bro you did good and please keep on going. oh yeah we need some information for the 'earth' since nancy keeps her sanity for her children. and jack I think he is okay. anyway I think some info for nancy would be needed
jesus perezRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Like the other review says reading this hurts my brain. It has so many random breaks and typos that you can never get into a rhythm reading this. I really want to read this because the premis sounds awesome but I literally had to quit a few chapters in. You should get an editor to smooth this out.
edit: I scaled the paragraph spacing down to the minimum and it helped alot. I started reading again because I new this had good potential and now I'm seeing it.
EllatrossRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The story itself is an incredibly interesting premise, make a race, watch them, and help them evolve, but its a game that aliens watch, pretty good premise you got there but unfortunately its not well executed, the story itself just feels... i dont know exactly how to put it but just does not feel good to read, I think the story can be good but its just not executed very well here