The Frost Knight: Chapter 1

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The World of Austrosa Is a land divided into 4 kingdoms: Puren, Rosewood, Snowfall, and Caldera. Outside of the kingdoms borders is lands filled with bandits and monsters alike. Orion Lancaster, A peasant born outside of the kingsoms. Son to a mage, and one of the strongest warriors in all of Austrosa. Orion lives a normal life until on his 12th birthday his village is attacked and family is killed. He awakens from a coma and discovers that he has newfound power and a Guardian spirit within him. Orion takes this new power and sets on a quest for revenge. Little does he know that he soon will wrap himself in a grave new journey, and a war between the kingdoms.