The Fourth Prince
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Once hatching as a black snake magical beast, the snake survives a thousand years and becomes a dragon. After seven hundred years, the black dragon magical beast finally reaches the requirement to ascend to the Immortal Realm instead of becoming human and restarting in its third evolution.However, two mortal armies fought and the black dragon is caught in the crossfire. It dies as its spirit tried to ascend into the Immortal Realm. Desperate to live on, the spirit of the black dragon forcibly enters the body of one of the empresses on the battlefield.Though the empress and her empire is overjoyed at the news, no one knew that it was really the black dragon she gave birth to. Now the black dragon must start his cultivation anew. This time, no one will stand in its way to succeed where it failed.This is the story of the fourth prince, the story of the black dragon's attempt to become immortal.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Yintian
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 143
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- 30,195
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- BoMannRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Like everything this Author writes, this story is also pure gold.
Rich world building.
Non pussy OP MC, all that good stuff most love.
It gets the "Thanks for the chapter ^^" seal of approval. - GodkingRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Hi, I just want to start off by saying that I am a fan of your work. On to my opinion.
I fell that all your stories are the same. Let's start with your main characters, in most of your stories the MC is reincarnated in a wealthy/ ruling class family who give your MC everything from techniques to weapons and armour. Basically your MC's never struggle because they always have the best of the best.you repeat a few things in your novels like how assassins are always after the MC etc.
Second you always seem to write about Dragons, you have about 5-7 stories on royal road and most of them have something to do about Dragons.
In my opinion you always give your MC to many powers/ abilities: ex. instead of giving your MC one or 2 abilities and let him figure How to use said power/ablities in multiple ways you just have him use a power in 1 or two ways and then give him a completely different power and have him use it in one or two ways and it keeps going on like that in all your stories.
Last your writing style is a bit weird instead of letting us understand your characters decisions through your writing the characters in our stories are always explaining an example would be your MC saying I choose this because of......instead of you explaining through subtlety. I'm not sure if I am saying this the right way so I'll give an example, most people don't explain their decisions unless someone ask but all your MC's always explain.
Also your writing style never changes that coupled with you basically writing absinthe same thing in every story makes me feel that I'm reading about the same character in each of your stories.
All in all I enjoy your stories and I hope you continue. Keep in mind that if you are writing a side story you can change your style up. - zlightning123Royal Road★★★★ 3.5Truthfully this story is good but it is not really original. I mean it is so similar to the chronicles of the tiger immortal that it is not even funny. Honestly, if you are looking for a worthy side project, you shouldn’t just make a cheap knock off of your best story but should maybe instead work on one of the stories you gave up on. Two examples are Death Knight or the Necromancer King. Both of those were stories with great premises that honestly in my opinion were given up on too easily. That is my honest opinion.