The Fourth Dimension
Self-Published
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Description
A high school student, bored of the mundane reality about him, is introduced to the hidden and fantastical world of magic by a mysterious silver-haired woman; wherein, he learns a troubling secret regarding himself and the creation of life on Earth.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- NicholasGrande
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 33
- Views
- 2,391
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Cedric The Rabbit SlayerRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0It's a story of magic, mystery, twists, and turns. The premise is technically a reincarnation plot. The mage is visited by a former friend, and must now defend himself against past enemies who find him soon after. However, there's a huge emphasis on the mystery of himself and of the world he inhabits.
Style: There are some very big words in this novel, complicated concepts, and sometimes very large paragraph. The plot is very interesting, but I think it would benefit from simpler words to explain the complicated concepts and make them easier to understand.
Story: The concept is fascinating. It’s not just a magical world, but it involves time distortions, mages on the level of Gods, the creation of Earth, and more.
Grammar: The grammar is great. I haven’t noticed anything that would take me out of the story.
Character: I would describe the MC as an emo philosopher. He can be a bit annoying in the first chapter, but he works for the story and is forced out of his existential dread by the other characters. Basically, he’s a dude in need of an ass whooping, and he gets one.
Overall, the story is enjoyable, but you need to pay attention to all the little details. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for something with a lot of mystery and elements of philosophy.