The Forgotten One
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Hey there everbody. This will be my second upload to Roll 20. Unfortunately I wasn't able to continue my previous one due to life and what not but I'm now back and have a some what new idea I've been kicking around for years. We'll see if i head back to my other fiction due to having things calming down. And like always I'm open to constructive critisims. Any way on to the synopsis.
The world as we know it is gone. Torn from everyone due to two major things. First and foremost a biologica lweapon that no one wanted to take credit for after it was released and couldn't be stopped (a zombie virus of sorts) and the way that many nations thought to stop it from spreading was to destory everything they could ofcourse that didn't include them selves. So there the world was in a mexican standoff with hundreds of countries with hundreds of nuclear weapons just dareing one another to make the first move. Once again no one knew who started it but it didn't matter once it started the world was doomed.
In an attempt to save people some scientists began working on a way to cryogenically frezze people so they could surive the on coming armegedon. The problem was before they could begin testing it on humnas the nukes began launching. In a bid to save them selves a family gave their youngest son to the scientists as a test subject. He had already been infected by the virus weeks before the nukes were being threatened and still retained his humanitiy. After being betrayed by his family after telling them of his ability to stay him self and a few things the bio weapon had changed in him physically he was sedated with enough drugs to kill a whole pride of elephants and forced to take part in the experiment. The last thing he remembers was watching his world close around him (his cryo pod) and his family's face of sadness but also hope in the fact that them betraying him may give them a chance to live.
This is a fan fiction in which many aspects of one of my favorite games will be quiet prevelent. It will be obvious to those who have played it but for those who may not the game i'm going to be baseing some of the things in this novel is called Prototype. And no I do not own the rights to the cover. If the creater would like for me to pull it down please messege me.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Dominit
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- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 3,169
Chapters(12 total)
- Chapter 3Jun 9, 2018
- TwoJun 2, 2018
- OneJun 1, 2018
- Introduction?May 30, 2018
- The Forgotten One Chapter 7Sep 19, 2018
- The Forgotten One Chapter 6Aug 31, 2018
- The Forgotten One Chapter 5May 24, 2018
- The Forgotten One Chapter 4May 24, 2018
- The Forgotten One Chapter 3May 23, 2018
- The Forgotten One Chapter 2May 21, 2018
- The Forgotten One Chapter 1May 20, 2018
- The Forgotten One PrologueMay 19, 2018
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Community Reviews(2)
- DaglesRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I really like your story, and wanted to give you a bit of feedback:
STYLE: I like the descriptive but still emotional style you’re going for, but you have to be careful with repetitions. Like when you mention something in sentence 1, and then say the same in sentence 2 again, just with a bit of more context, or a cause for that.
STORY: Your idea is really good, and on the more original side of fictions, but we have to wait and see, what you will do with that...
CHARACTER(s): So far your characters feel fleshed out and thought through, even though we don’t actually know much about their motives and motivations. Of course it is really early into the story (chapter 2)
Edit: I’ve read your synopsis again, and this is no fanfic. A fanfiction is a book, that is entirely based on someone else’s work, and not only inspired by multiple books, films and games.... - NoxVernaRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Honestly the chapters that have been released are an amazing start so far, my only issue is that once the story starts picking up it is all that is left.
No doubt that this would do well if it were to be off of its hiatus.