The First Testament: Rebirth

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Humanity was wrong. They are not alone, hence they were unprepared when they came.Humanity was wrong. They are not the only world, hence they were forced to adapt.The World has changed, and when two worlds merge into one, with a third lurking in the shadows waiting to pounce, how will humanity change with it?[A bit of violence, foul language and dirty thinking. and maybe doing.][Please read and review, i'd like tips and criticism to improve][and please don't get offended, this is all fiction][and if you spot any mistakes please let me know, i'll change it straight away :)]

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: badluck

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Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 8,437

Chapters(7 total)

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Wolfram1Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well i’m not really used to writing reviews, partially because i’m not a native speaker and also because things i write sadly have a way of turning out differently from how i envisioned them, but i will try anyways, so bear with me.
I usually leave stories be which haven’t been rated yet and leave the discovery of those hidden gems to other people, but somehow i was drawn in and decided to give it a try. U DIDN’T DISAPPOINT! This story is certainly one of those gems.
U alternate between your characters, fleshing them out in the process and giving the reader a multitude of different few-points, agendas as well as emotions to enjoy. Alongside this u insert the necessary information about your world, which seems to get increasingly detailed and colorful.
There is already a rough story-line visible even though, as of right now, there are only 6 chapter so far, and one that doesn’t seem half assed at all, which makes me look at this novel with glee.
Crammer wise i noticed a few things, but they all seem to stem from typing errors, and the way u express yourself certainly transcends my own capabilities.
All in all i can’t wait to see where this story will lead me. I hope more and more people read this story and discover this magnificent world u created for themselves, whether it goes down in the foreshadowed war or prevails and comes out new, better and stronger.