The First Primordial [DROPPED]
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Description
[Story dropped until further notice and is being kept as a reminder of where I started. I don't currently plan on restarting the story but will leave it as a possible future option]
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- Status
- Cancelled
- Author
- MrCasual525
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 21
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Community Reviews(1)
- UnderloadRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The book is only firce chapters in, so there isn't much of a story to write review upon. Still, there are a few things I can say,
1. The character voice: it's calm and meticulous, making the chapters easy to read.
2. Story pace: I personally think the mc should have fallen into a village to rule. The hole is too dark and quiet for a story about primodials.
3. Grammer: Though there are missing commas, i belive it's better to have running g sentences than to have sentences chocked dead by commas. The grammar is fine. I understood everything that was said.
P.s: I hope this turtle starts running as soon as possible.