The First Insectoid Hive

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Created In A Lab on a faraway planet whose name was Sorne, was a girl who had been tested on with experimental genes and had turned her into the first of its kind, the insectoid. She soon escapes the lab and will soon creates her hive of other creatures similar to her and soon take revenge on the people who had done experiments on her whilst trying to control her instincts.

This Story Is fanfiction of a videogame called “Rimworld”. I will be using it for inspiration and a bit of story but I will be making some changes from the game to make the story more interesting and less likely to be copywritten if this does. I will be using some names and terminology but not a lot because I don’t know how much I can write about.

I am not a consistent writer and am only doing this as a hobby. Also, I am not too good at grammar, if you see any, be happy to comment on them so I may edit them out (: Also, IWrite Chapters relatively short compared to other stories just so everyone knows.

Thanks to GreenGrass For Being my first review and regular viewer! (:

This Story will now be on hiatus forever like All my other stories. If you wish to see continued then ask someone else to continue where I left off, everyone has my permission to use my story as my stories are to tell a story from a new perspective and not for gain.

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • greenGrassRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Hello, I really love this story, the chapters are a bit short but otherwise it is exactly what I was looking for together with an active author. If it stays with such big publications it will only get better. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters and continuing to follow the story.
  • Dragon enjoyerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I would like to start with the concept I love this type of concept with like a hive mind queen but the subjects have their own little personalities I have personally only seen one other story like that it's called “Queen of Mud” and so far it's one of my favorites.
    The grammer is a little iffy but that's to be expected I would personally add a little bit more emotion after speaking like after a character speaks add like “I said excitedly” For me, it just adds more emotion, and makes me picture a more normal conversation but do what you want it's your story after all
    I really love playing Rim World on my computer. and I think this has quite a lot of potential I think conversation can be done a bit better but overall quite good and I think this has very good potential.