The Fated Ones (moved)
Self-Published
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Description
Book is discontinued until further notice. Read the Notice below for reasons why.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- infame215
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 13
- Views
- 578
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Jacob234Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0This story is okay, had a rough beginnings. Tho at the ending it started to pick up and get better.
Characters: This is one of the other good things you have done, beside the story, because the combination do not seem likely, but you make it work.
Style- it can use some more work, seeing as you struggle with connecting the flow of paragraphs at some points.
Story- As i said before the story seeming interesting, but the flow can make it hard to follow one action. After the last chapter you posted the problem was less occurring.
Grammer- Get a proofreader
P.S- the chapter with the little girl made me tear up a bit 😰