The Fallen Legion: Accidental Renegade

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

GoonRanger

• Taking this down
  Jun 14, 2017
• It's up on Amazon!
  Jun 12, 2017
• And That's A Wrap!
  Jun 11, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• RandomNinjaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  So, there have been more updates to this story, novel (whatever floats your goat)😁
  This might get a bit long, you've been forewarned.
  At this point there are 9 chapters, and this seems a good point to give an updated review.  Let's start at the top; Style, style is hard to really give a rating in my opinion just because of what it represents. I have given 5 though because the way it reads is different from other authors and when reading outloud there is a flow. This flow at times isn't perfect but I'm chalking that up to it still being early in the story and the characters are still getting used to each other which is normal.
  Story is now 5 stars and that is because the foundation for an interesting journey can be seen being layed down (in my opinion).
  Grammar still 5 as there doesn't seem to be any errors that stick out or interrupt while reading. Word choice also doesn't seem to be repetitive like in some other stories I've read.
  Now onto characters, this is another hard thing to rate as it mostly depends on the type of characters you like reading about. Trying not to be convoluted and avoid giving to much away, the characters seem to have a lot of different facets to themselves. Marc in particular has many. At first you might not notice it but when you look at the small things, the reactions or responses to other characters and situations you start to truly see these characters being revealed. This gradual reveal rather than in your face reveal is a nice thing to see as our interest gets poked bit by bit.