The Eyes of Death
Self-Published
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Description
It is the year 2042. The Depowered Lord of Chaos Ekwensu has a plan to restore the eyesight of his best friend, the death God Onwu. Picking some mortal companions along the way as he enters the ire of all pantheons worldwide as he plans to do the one good deed he feels he is overdue to do.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- Afrostorian
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 234
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- RznRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This opening has a handful of gods that are not essential to the plot being described as the scene is particularly about the Onwu losing his eyes. There are some issues with the prose, such as the line about the food freezing over. This is mostly because two different ideas are in play for a single sentence and the author just jumbled them up. The writing is good and the premise is interesting, though the focus is a little off the mark in the beginning.