The Explorer's Guide

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Description

All seems lost to a lonely prisoner in supermax, everything seeming meaningless as he recovers from an internal injury caused by a rival gang. As he goes through life with low morale and a shattered liver, one day he is thrown into a conspiracy and dies at the hands of his own gang's ploy.

But is death really the end for him?

Will he ever find eternal peace and slumber or will he have to fight and struggle, just to be able to prevail?

Under current heavy editing, as my writing has improved and I felt like the initial chapters just didn't make the cut.

Additional tags:Psychological; Adventure; Drama.

Author:Hello everyone, I don't expect a lot of people to read my story but if you do I sincerely thank you. English is not my first language, but do not take this as some kind of excuse as I will try to my very best to improve and make the story fluid in both grammar AND content.

Disclaimer:This story is purely fictional any real events or people displayed are purely coincidental. I got the Image from google and I do not own it. IF the owner would like me to take it down please PM me,

Thank you.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Obitus

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 22
Views: 17,637

Chapters(17 total)

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SoufdeboefRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I almost didn't read the first two chapters of your story.
The reason why is because the synopsis has spelling mistakes in it. I know people say you shouldn't judge a book on it's cover but, for me, this is always an indication that the writing is not going to be that good. The fact that your synopsis only has 4 lines (Excluding the author's note wich also has a mistake in it) only strenghtened this belief for me.
Luckily, i was proven wrong the moment i clicked on the first chapter. Although there are some spelling mistakes your writing is pretty good, i even almost forgot that you weren't a native English speaker untill i read your synopsis again. I would like to go in detail about your writing itself but sadly i don't have the ability to do that because i am not really good at writing myself, let alone in English.
As for your story, it basically hasn't even begun yet so the only thing i can really say about it is that you have an interesting premise even though things similar have been done before.
About your main character i can say a little more though. His actions so far have been really believable as are his motivations. I would probably do the same thing if i had been in his situation wich, for me, makes him relatable. The same thing i can't say about the other characters so far, even though i know you wrote them not to be used again.
All in all i think you can make something great if you really put your mind to it. I hope you can make something amazing. For me and for you.