The Exiles return

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Humans in the Holy realm are a fallen race, they are discriminated against, enslaved and are over all, looked down upon. And some of their race, mostly the royalty and nobility, are exiled long ago, to the great void, never to be seen again. But when a transmission from across the great void reaches the ears of the Elven queen, because of her curiosity, she decides to respond to it and invites the ones that are transmitting the signals, to the Elven realm.

The transmitters are enthusiastic as they’ve been searching for life outside their galaxy, and with the technology capable of travelling between galaxies recently became possible, they accepted the invitation.

A first contact made outside the Milkdromeda galaxy, by the Terran republic, and the Elven realm.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Meniir

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 21
Views: 7,358

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

LosGoddusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'd like to begin by saying that, it is indeed a more original principal plot than that of what I've seen recently, as stuff tends to repeat in most of what's popular nowadays, but I guess that's just what's searched for, which I can't turn down, as it is not my place to do so.
Anyway, the secondary plot is met before, but is still thought well through, unlike some other amateur works, so a + for that
to be honest, it is pretty obvious the author is jot of English speaking origin, and that to someone who is also not from such origins, so I'd say the "grammar" and not only could be slightly improved upon.
Now something that made me personally think, is the explanations, this usually comes in naturally, explaining concepts, such as void arks or what the void is and so on, though here it took a more direct approach of explaining stuff rawly, which can be good, for me is totally alright, but for some others, it may get annoying to read through the explanations.
Not trying to be found annoying or something, I can't be entirely giving advices as is the author's job to write, besides, I'm just saying my opinion so far, is only 2 chapters after all, hang in there author, I'll be your fan for now
that's all, I'd say is a good first work.
QolboqanRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
F*ck advanced review harus ada minimal 200 words, goddamit. Ok f*ck it
Cerita bagus, tapi baru 2 chapter, belum tentu chapter depan
Grammar idk klo gk salah ada typo i don't remember
Character score rendah karena masih blom ada eksposisi
There is it 200 words? I hope it's 200 words
Ok not yet, goddamit
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WHY THE FUCK DOES IT NEED A MINIMUM OF 200 WORDS AAAA!!!
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