The Evolution of a Snake

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Snakes, they bring forth a primordial dread in many, and awe in others. Sometimes they are depicted as evil tricksters with honeyed tongues, others as monsters devouring all they can, and sometimes as protectors guarding treasures or even gods. What way will a freshly hatched snake go? Will it become a glibb-toungued deciever, tricking prey into its mouth or maybe it will become feared even amongst monsters. Perhaps it will become a protector guarding hordes of treasure from intruders. Watch as its story unfolds.... Unless of course it gets eaten before that.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Kdonm7

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYMAGICANTI-HERO LEADNON-HUMAN LEADGRIMDARK

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Rating
3.9/ 5.0
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151
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32,513

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • DragonightmareRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Love the story i like the style of monster evolution litrpgs and i think so far you are doing a great job making it seem like an animal i know that sounds wierd but people who have seen similar novels with anim
    als slowly gaining intelligence and power know what i mean
  • kuhndog900Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    great start, like the quates. a lot of non-human main leads end up with a complete human shape, when this happens the storie sometimes goes dry. just a warning. it is also hard to entroduce another charector without it being a disenbodied voice in his head, because the main charactor can't speak (for now...) alot of writers follow the dialoge of everything around the main lead, making it less about the snake and more about the company and charactors he runs into. you should resaerch about the bodies and behavior of different snakes in order to create a simi-real snake (don't have the snake go through snow like it is nothing, most die) and you can steal cool ideas from the more exotic snakes, like spitting cobras can spit posion in defence, been known to blind people that mess with them. snakes in some cultures are evil tricksters, in others they are healers. i hope you stick with this storie and please if you are going to drop it atleast end the storie, even if its "snakes falls off a tree and breaks its neck"
  • iwannabeatigerRoyal Road
    ★ 1.0
    Read the description. You'll get an idea of what to expect concerning spelling and grammar.