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Present war fast approaching its climax. This is a series of books featuring a boy named Zilian. Living in a time of war, anything could happen and that it does. Everything ends up falling apart around him, life as he knew it was not the truth, living a life obscure of what was the truth of his father and in turn of not knowing the truth, he loses his father. Friendships are forged, closer ones are lost. Allies are made, enemies retaliate. The responsibility of the sword rests upon him.

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Hyperion915Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Grammar: small errors but nothing i wouldnt expect to slip through the cracks of editing. the accents of some of the characters are also somewhat weird, but not to the point where im bothered about anything. doesnt impact readability
Style: the first to third person jumps are somewhat jarring but otherwise there's nothing in particular to complain about
Story: not much to say here yet, not enough chapters have come out. plot is going in an interesting direction though and has left a lot of options for whatever the author plans to do later
Characters: the hand of the author shines through once or twice but otherwise the interactions feel pretty realistic. characters are distinct and grow, things are good
Overall: this score is pointless since everyone always does 5 stars for any story they even sort of like. 5 stars it is

The Elemental Swords - Book One: Sunder

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