The Elemental Dungeon

Self-Published

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Description

A man, killed while protecting his girlfriend, reincarnates as a dungeon core on another world.

He choses the, as yet unknown to this world, path of the Elemental Dungeon.

The MC will use all maner of elemental beasts and creatures that range from made of the elements, to ones that command the very nature of those elements to thier command.

Follow the MC through the twists and turns of trying to survive as a dungeon in a world that is not always too friendly to the humble dungeon

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Aebhel

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 124
Views: 62,850

Chapters(35 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

Hawk 9Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I would not be surprised if this story just stopped updating one day with no reason as the author is inconsistent with uploads now it's not their fault but they seem very accident prone
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KelvasRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A good story with great potential. Not heavy with a whole bunch of technical data. The boxes for status window need to be resized but that is a small thing. Want to see more soon!
Uriel SceptimRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story is overall good. The author explains the world, and its rules, and shows bits of its lore and history early in the story which at that point don't disturb the story composition. The world system looks more sentient than it should, some aspects of it are visible from the beginning so that's not a big spoiler. However, there is potential for later developments to add an extra layer to the story. There is really nothing to complain about so far.
Characters are barely introduced at the chapter I post my review on. They just are, but already they have their quirks and established personalities that have the potential to grow. Some of them may change, and some grow stagnant but it's good so far.
Now two biggest turn-offs for many people. Grammar and style are showing that author just put the first steps into storytelling. This is harder than people usually thought, it is. On my part, I can criticize overly complicated sentences. It's the main problem of the story in my opinion but it's not a deal breaker either. One more thing that comes to my mind are sometimes weirdly run dialogues or odd descriptions, but again it's passable.
Grammar... Well. I'm no expert I will be pointing out things that can't be excused.
Missing capital letters, missing question marks or exclamations are unfortunately not helping with an appreciation of the quite good story. Also, formatting is rudimentary which doesn't help with the changes in the narrative point of view.
And these lead us to the point where some people would not enjoy the story because of what I just said. Sometimes is hard to read, and immersion-breaking formatting or grammar can be problem for many people this is my warning.
However, if you can pass over that the story itself is interesting enough to entertain you for a while long enough to forgive most of the drops. Eventually, you get used to the style and stop bothering with edit suggestions.
For author: Keep working on your style and I'm sure you give us a solid s
Hello0065069Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story has a good start but. What made me lose intrest was a lack of detail to go with it. Floors are made in a chapter and so lack detail beyond a rough description and some monsters. But I did like the descriptions of said monsters.
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conahbRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Don't want to put a low score down since the story itself might be really good, but from the first sentence the constant shift from first to second person perspective is jarring enough to be all I could focus on. The fact that it happens repeatedly in a single sentence is further off putting. Fix that and I'm sure the fic will do well