The Dungeon of Potential

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Description

there are many legends, some myth and some truth, of dragons and princesses, of demons and hero’s, and granted, many are true, but not everything is as it seems, for when you lift the veil many so called heroes are more demonic then their enemy, many princess more wicked and greedy then any dragon. Within the world of Alesia (formally known as earth), not everything is as it seems, and yet the one topic that can never be agreed upon is dungeons.

dungeons, a place of wonder, a place of treasure, a place of love and passion, filled with the most beautiful and mystical creatures and landscapes ever seen.

dungeons, a place of horror, a place of death, a place of heartache and despair, filled with the most menicing and soul-destroying creatures and landscapes ever seen.

as for an adventurer to seek treasure, is it not fair that they have to be challenged, and should the challenge be to great for them, this is their own fault, no?

well, decide now or later, it matters not, but do not view my child with prejudice, as he is only trying to protect himself. So here you go my cruel followers, life’s cruelty, a smart, and yet oh so foolish boy, Here, is The Dungeon of Potential.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Lone Star

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
117
Views
35,066

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • Acolyte_of_cthulhuRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Later in the story it just I gets f#cking awsome like seriously. KEVIN is best!!!!
  • FrostPrismRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Currently chapter 4 is realised.
    This book so far is one the best I have seen on this website and is ranked in my top 5 books on RR. I don't know what else to say besides that if you like dungeon stories this is one the best and I would recomend you to read it!
    If you have read Oblivion I would rank this book almost as high.
  • FantasyStepRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I like it.
    The story is great and surprisingly original in its way in my honest opinion. The Main feels alive, a basic thing yes but non the less important. I am a fan of the bonding thingy and can find other things to gush over but the gist of it is that the story IS REALLY GOOD and I cant wait for more.
    Sadly the grammar is somewhat problematic AT TIMES with a few errors that are rather unacceptable like here instead of hear and break the reading flow. It´s good enough overall though and not a chore to read or anything but if I read something I enjoy the f*ck out of such mistakes pain me a little.
    A 10 out of 10 minus 1 due to grammar :P
    YOU SHOULD TOTALLY GIVE IT A GO THOUGH.
    Like right now. Of you go.
    You want to read this trust me.
    ;)
  • MetaldagonRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    The beginning was interesting with a little bit of intrique but then around chapter 7 you kinda just threw every single part of it in the trash to give the main character a reason for power or something. Honestly had you played out the whole of it without him breaking the limits or whatever I feel like the story would have been 100 times better then I feel its going to be.
    Good news is you have few grammar mistakes though every now and then they do pop up but they are easy enough to just pass over.