The Dungeon Hive- Volume 3

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Description

It has been years since the Dungeon Hive created the Beastkin. In that time, the Kin had grown in numbers and strength but with the growth come problems. In a bid to unite the Kin, the Speaker made an audacious plan to go to war against the Humans. Can she succeed? More importantly, would the actions of the Dungeon Hive help or hinder her plans?

This is it; the last and FINAL adventure of The Dungeon Hive!

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For edited version of the story, the full trilogy (Book_1: Fantasy Begins,Book_2: Dungeon Flames,Book_3: Spread of the Dungeons) arenow available on Amazon. Please take a look, and leave a rating. Thanks

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2018
Author
Ghostman

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.6/ 5.0
Followers
200
Views
157,663

Chapters(43 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • BoredBeyondBeliefRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story is interesting, fun to read.Perhaps the author should of stuck with one book, as many fans seem to have lost it.
  • ThorngotRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The trilogy has a unique approach to Dungeon Cores, and a plausible enough & definitely entertaining way of expanding on the various tropes & aspects relating to them.
    The style is blunt, but in a good way. If something is happening, Ghostman tells your it's happening. No beating around the bush, and any exposition leading up to a point also adds detail to the world. It's still a bit blunt though.
    The story is great. The plot line is coherent, all of Chekhov's guns have been fired, and the dreaded Idiot Ball has not once shown it's face (perhaps because the Hive is akin to an enclosed cubicle packed full of divergently hyperfixated monkeys with keyboards, and while it's certain that they'll eventually write something of value to publish, it's still a wonder every time that they manage to agree who gets printer access).
    Grammar. How I wish this story and the two previous ones in this series had RoyalRoad's Reader Suggestions feature enabled. It's bearable enough to enjoy the story, but still bothersome.
    Characters are well written. Motivations, personality quirks, explicable personality changes, they got 'em. 'Fraid I don't know character writing well enough to say much more than that they were enjoyable.
    Also yeah. As BoredBeyondBelief's review said, shame that it doesn't seem like most readers carried over between books. Probably has something to do with how Vol.2 ended with a link to Vol.3's Amaxon page, but not to it's Royal Road page.
    Edit: huh, apparently hyperlinks are just deleted when put in reviews, even though they're presented as an option.
  • GirthmasterRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This is a fun little trilogy that doesn't take itself too seriously!
    The worldbuilding is fresh, yet touches on a lot of fantasy tropes from a more interesting angle.
    Would be a 5 star review if not for the errors in the writing itself - consider using either an editor or beta readers to proofread!