The Dreamers of Peace [Books 1 and 2 complete]

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Two star-crossed dreamers stand on the brink of becoming the heroes Leveria desperately needs. Together, they can be the catalysts that finally end over seven centuries of civil war between the Ruby and the Sapphire. Apart, they risk becoming just another link in the chain of hatred and vengeance that has bound their broken kingdom for so long.

Capable of mass destruction on the battlefield and cleansing entire cities of plagues, Alexia is the second wizard in Leverian history to have mastery over all eight divine energies. While King Sapphire wields her power to conquer the Ruby Kingdom and her father leverages her status to establish a dynasty, Alexia dreams of using her magic to restore peace to their broken kingdom. She is sent on a perilous mission with a cynical wizard who once shared her dreams and must discover what happens when she is commanded to harm those she would rather befriend.

Across the border, Zander is driven by his mother’s dying request to give her magical locket to his life’s mate. Striving to become a knight, he discovers that the kingdom is under attack by a mysterious power that can possess the minds of beasts. Before he can mobilize against this threat, he is thrust onto the front lines of the war and must discover what happens when his dreams of glory are put to the test.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: C.S. Charles

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GodOfWisdom3141Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The characterisation of The Dreamers of Peace is some of the best if not the best I have ever had the pleasure of reading on Royal Road. It's too soon to tell how good the entire story will be but it looks excellent so far. I especially enjoyed the story's handling of war(one of the main themes). It does an amazing job of portraying the nuance of war, and the cycle of vengeance. As for grammar, there have been no mistakes that I can remember. The writing style reaches a level of quality thus far present only in actual novels. Overall, I have no criticisms. The only problem is that there isn't enough of it.
RiversideRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Are you looking for the next big thing? Like Epic Fantasy, dark elements, mature elements? Christopher Sova's got you covered. Let me explain.
Style: Solid Epic Fantasy writing. Can be heavy on narration and description at times which takes me out of it, but I do also feel that for every moment of over-description, there is a chunk of dialogue exchange a little later. I like my writing with more dialogue but especially in Epic works, this is expected to be a little higher, so it is no big issue. Writing itself is crisp, however, and stays focused when it comes time to engage with characterization and worldbuilding. I have in my mind who the characters are and what they are doing and why.
Grammar: Grammar and punctuation are on point. No formatting issues, no odd typos which repeat. It looks professionally done.
Story: Revolves around Zander and Alexia. Zander is a soldier-in-training. Alexia is a powerful mage who dislikes violence. Both have an anti-sex to them which stands out in their heavily sexualized society. In the first 10k we learn about the world the characters inhabit and the characters but not much else. Zander is being sent on a mission to hunt wolves. Alexia doesn't want to be deployed to the frontlines again (there is a war going on). The nature of Epic Fantasy, though, means a slow start. I enjoyed what I read. I can tell an epic story is being set up and that alone, based off what I read, intrigues me.
Characters: I think the characters are the best part. Worldbuilding is interesting. But worldbulding is background information and a war between two countries happens in every epic and high fantasy story. The characters, though, take the worldbuilding and shine on their own. Zander's detached celibacy, Alexia's academic and magical inclinations, her trauma from war. These are the things which are pushing me forward. Characters are written well and though only a short time has passed, these characters I can see in my mind's eye.
In Sum: a good start to
C CrowleyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This book is an enjoyable read if nothing else—well-written and it clearly knows what it wants to do and where it wants to go.
Style:
The prose is good and changes appropriately based on character POV. The dialogue between characters is unique, and it's easy to properly imagine who is speaking and what they sound like. I enjoy the structure of the book itself, being a fan of Prologues and stories that have multiple character POVs. The Prologue in particular was uniquely done, focusing on tugging at reader emotions from the get-go versus being lore-heavy or action-heavy.
Story:
The story gives me some vibes early on that are a bit of a mixture of The Way of Kings (Zander as Kaladin and Alexia as Shallan). Despite the characters different here from who I referenced, their roles in the story feel eerily similar. Another fair comparison I would say is, although it is a video game, the story of Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valencia where we have our female, magic-wielding protag on one side of a potential conflict and our male, sword-bearing knight on the other side. Not much of the story has unfolded yet, with much of the early chapters being getting to know the characters. The worldbuilding is done well though, weaving in naturally into dialogue and casually name-dropping what Tolkien referred to as "secondary worldbuilding" tidbits. The "lore within the lore" essentially.
Grammar:
Strong throughout, just a couple of nitpicky spots where there may have been excessive comma usage or a sentence may not have made complete sense on a first read and required re-reading. Very few and far between though, with the bulk of the story being easy to read and flowing well.
Character:
The core group of characters on Zander's side of the story are going to be likeable or unlikeable based almost purely on reader preference as they're a group of mostly immature knights-in-training who act, well, predictably like teenage boys who think they're the grandest and strongest. They fit well
CaelrockRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Style: The writing is rich and immersive, showcasing a deep attention to detail that brings the world and its characters vividly to life. Whether it’s the emotional depth of Melody’s farewell or the intensity of Zander’s training, the author’s style excels in creating a strong sense of atmosphere. The descriptive passages are evocative and poetic, lending the work a distinct tone that feels both fantastical and grounded. Occasionally, the introspective moments can slow the pace slightly, but they also give the reader a chance to delve into the inner workings of the characters’ minds, enhancing emotional engagement.
Grammar: The grammar is consistently strong, with few noticeable issues. The dialogue is natural, and punctuation is generally effective in conveying tone and mood. A bit more variation in sentence structure could help with pacing, especially during action sequences or moments of heightened emotion, but overall, the language flows well. The text’s complexity matches the epic nature of the story without becoming convoluted, making it accessible while still feeling sophisticated.
Story: The story’s plot is both engaging and layered, with a nice balance between personal stakes and larger political or magical conflicts. Melody’s poignant farewell creates a powerful emotional anchor, while Zander’s and Alexia’s arcs set the stage for grander developments. The world-building is intricate and thoughtful, giving a sense of history and weight to the narrative. The use of magic and the tension between kingdoms adds depth and intrigue, while the character-driven moments ensure the story remains emotionally compelling. Some of the threads feel dense, with several plotlines introduced quickly, but this complexity promises a rewarding and richly woven tale as the story unfolds.
Characters: The characters are well-developed and multidimensional, with each playing a crucial role in driving the narrative forward. Melody’s vulnerability, Zander’s ambition, and Alexia’s int
W.D.RoseRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Innocence Lost: The Dreamers of Peace is a fantasy novel that follows the stories of Zander and Alexia as they follow their own paths. It includes nighthood, magic, and political aspects set in a medieval-style world.
The prologue immediately hooks the reader with its emotional depth, introducing Zander as a potential "chosen one" through his mother Melody's final moments. This scene not only invests the reader in Zander's journey but also introduces Sunrise" and the significance of Leveria/Leverith, setting up mysteries that promise to unfold throughout the story.
Style: The writing effectively balances action, dialogue, and description. There can be quite descriptive heavy scenes, but it's the beginning of the story, and that's needed to create the setting. However, the author includes poetic language at times, which can be both a strength and a weakness. While it adds depth and beauty to certain scenes, occasionally it can feel overwritten or interrupt the flow of the narrative. Overall thought, the writing style clearly captures the aspect of the world.
Story:
The author excels at world-building, gradually revealing the world with descriptive and well thought-out dialogue. From the bustling town of Bear's Crossing to the grand Saphirhold castle, each location comes alive with rich detail. Some readers might find the dense world-building in the early chapters too much; however, this level of detail is needed to establish the backdrop against which the story unfolds.
The plot development is very organic and well-paced. The story sets up a classic hero's journey with Zander as the protagonist. The external conflict between the Ruby and Sapphire kingdoms provides a great backdrop for the characters' personal journeys, especially because the 2 protagonists are of the 2 kingdoms. The introduction of Alexia in a parallel storyline creates a promise of interesting character dynamics in the future. The ongoing conflict between the Ruby and Sapphire kingdoms adds a layer