The Dragon clan

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This is a story about a dragon clan that supposedly disappeared along with theDragon Goddess Tiamatafter the battle that put an end to the great universal and interdimensional war between the various superior beings. Which culminated in the destruction of 5 billion lights years of the universe, creatingthe great void sea, where there is only chaotic essence. Inside this sea where the concept of time and space was destroyed we can find, a small piece of land where we can see dragon clan that can live in this Great Void.

HiFirst I want to say that this is my first story and the English it’s not my mother language. So, if someone starts to reading this than be warned that this could be a shitty story HEHEHEEHWell this a story of a dragon clan, where I will mix the several gods and supreme beings of the various mythologies. I will say now that the MC will be OP since he belongs to dragon clan that is the personal guard of a Dragon Goddess and he will have a harem of war maidens of several species. AND NO, it’s not a reincarnation story or something like that.I hope you enjoy this ride and i will accept critics and ideas from my readers...if i have some HAHHAHAHAH

Almost all the descriptions and names are taken from FantasyNameGenerators.com with my personal touch

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: DarkNoobWriter

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 41
Views: 28,254

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

PeppermancerRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Style: I hate the color coding for the names. It hurts my eyes a lot. It's more distracting than useful. It's also almost entirely dialogue, which can be a bit dull at times.
Story: I like the concept, but it's very confusing at points and I'm never quite clear on what's happening.
Grammar: A few miss spelled things, other wise is fine.
Character: So many characters, all already magically in the main characters harem, little to no character progression. I can't remember anybodies name, the cast is just far too big. I still don't know how many characters you've introduced even with the color coding it's just a mess.
Summary: Get rid of the color coding, shrink the cast a lot, and add more descriptive writing. Less dialogue, more descriptions of places, feelings, characters actions, etc. Tighten up the story to make it more precisely clear what the reader should and should not know, while not confusing them. Look up "The Hero's Journey" to see a helpful story structure. I think you just tried to put in all the ideas you've ever had into one story, and just should choose a few to focus on.