The Dimensional Artificer

Self-Published

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Description

Anlal Stagast was a master mage, skilled both in dimensional magic and magic crafting. Though having accomplished much in his long life, when his time came there wasn't much he could do except say goodbye to his close ones. While he didn't want to die, he had made his peace with it.

He wasn't expecting to wake up again in the body of a young child.

...What now?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
Mongoose

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREMAGICREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.8/ 5.0
Followers
61
Views
7,759

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • ActusRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is an early review, as the author has only written 4 chapters so far. However, I'm really enjoying them. This story has a similar premise to Beginning after the End, except the grammar is better and I'm more interested in the main character.
    That being said, this novel is not a ripoff. As the other review says, it falls solidly into a comfortable spot in the 'born into another world but somehow retained the memories of your past life' genre.
    Now, I'm generally very picky about novels I like. It's not that I care much if there are a few grammar errors or the like, but the style of the writing is very important to me. If it doesn't flow right, I just can't continue the novel.
    The Dimensional Artificer flows well. It's not breaking any conventions, nor has it (so far) made me rethink my life decisions. It's a fun, easy read that I suspect will transition into more of an epic fantasy, although who knows where the author will take it.
    Particulars:
    Style: Already covered, reads very smoothly.
    Grammar: Few to no errors.
    Story: Steryotpical but enjoyable. Good amount of potential to work with, so I hope to remove the 'steryotypical' part of this review as the author writes more.
    Characters: Nothing much here yet. The story has had a bit of a slow start, which I don't mind at all. I actually enjoy the longer buildup. Nothing about any of the characters really makes me go 'wow, this guy is REALLY interesting', but - again - this is an early review and the author will have time to update that.
    I reccomend you check this novel out.
    NOTE: I will rewrite this review after the author has written 25 chapters, so it is more accurate for new readers.
  • Mr. Mis'chiefRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The three chapters I read so far are quite enjoyable.
    Nothing groundbreaking or especially new, but a solid basis.
    Personally I quite enjoyed that the protagonist didn't learn the language in an instant like in many other books.
    I hope this will develop into an interesting story, I wish you good luck dear author.