THE DEMON KING IS A MERCHANT

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Description

"In the sweeping tale that unfolds, we embark on an odyssey alongside Yoranios Gyovani, the once-mighty Demon King weary of his infernal throne. Yearning for the simplicity of a merchant's life, he steps forth into a vast, uncharted world, hungry for a taste of true purpose.

Yet, as fate oft decrees, his quest for serenity is met with the haunting specters of both ancient adversaries and newfound foes. A ruthless pursuit of power clashes with the smoldering embers of vengeance, casting shadows upon his once-illuminated path.

In this realm where trust and compassion dance a delicate waltz, destinies intertwine, birthing a kaleidoscope of divergent fates for its denizens. Their tales, etched in the annals of a world both wondrous and perilous, resonate with echoes of an epic age."

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: MOHAMED KATALONY

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 20
Views: 32,436

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Community Reviews(3)

Roy Novels InkRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Today, for some weird reason I wanted to read you story because I saw your synopsis and was partly interested in slice of life type story with my favourite tag the demon lord, but right from the start I just see blood and war, so what were you thinking when you start writing your synopsis?
i will keep reading your story because it look fun, but change the synopsis because it is MISLEADING.
sololevelingmax67Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
about your story i have some points:
1/ the story until chapter 5 is good but this kind of stories needs dept to fully love it.
2/ your grammar needs work.
3/ your characters will have to fell alive for your story to win people hearts.
4/ there are very good stories better thousand times than yours but Don't lose hope because it is your story and everyone have a very deferent way to success.
5/ the bad reviews: you will get some of them. Don't listen to them they will destroy your will to write more just for fun. i Don't know way maybe some crazy people do this for sport to see people lose and be sad all the time.
6/ about the demon lord gender: there are way too many stories about demon lord here and demon lord there. you have to find a special story to make people care because every year dozens of animes and manga about demon lord get on the TV and sites every YEAR. so be careful of what you write and what you Don't write.
7/ be smart of what your story content. because it wan throw people out if it has cringe. borring character. a lot of useless and i love to call them NPCs.
8/ until the chapter 10 or something to judge your story. HAVE FUN
BlueMintishRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
I can tell you have a lot of passion for this story. Underneath all the problems, which I will go into to, there is a good story here. But it's really hard to find. As hard as I tried, I could only get halfway through chapter 1.
You need to fix your formatting. Even if your story was awful, if it was formatted correctly, I could read it. Dialogue needs to be in quotations. Characters names need to have the first letter capitalized, and only the first letter. Dialogue should be on it's own line, with a new line for each new person talking. You should remove the large spaces between paragraphs, it's unneeded.
Don't get discouraged. These are simple mistakes any writer gets on their first work. The best advice I can give you is to read more and study how other writers write. You will get better, I promise, but I can't help you fix the other problems in your story until it becomes readable.