The Deal was beginning(Hiatus)

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Description

With kingdom at deaths door. And her loved ones falling one after another. She suffers and awaits her death. But does death has to be the End ? Bored Entity, powerful beyond reason, offers chance to make a Deal.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Red&Black

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 118
Views: 68,970

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Community Reviews(2)

KuroYamiRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story itself is interesting, although it needs a lot of work, the grammar specially, it needs to be a lot more readable for the readers. And the dialogs between characters seems a bit stiff to me. Lastly, improve on the characters themselves. Maybe I'll add more reviews when there are more chapters. Good luck.
BlackfyreRoyal Road
★ 1.0
This is an interesting idea, but the story as whole is in desperate need of a proof readers or really even a basic spell checker. There really no excuse to not even use a basic spell checker, in some stories I could see that creating errors if you've made up some words for things but this has a lot of really sad errors.
I hope the author keeps working hard and improving and the world always needs more author but at the same time their personal beliefs digust me so even if they write other things I probably won't spend the time reading it. I wish you luck on improving your skills.