The Deal was beginning(Hiatus)
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
With kingdom at deaths door. And her loved ones falling one after another. She suffers and awaits her death. But does death has to be the End ? Bored Entity, powerful beyond reason, offers chance to make a Deal.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Red&Black
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 118
- Views
- 68,970
Chapters(28 total)
- Not a ChapterSep 21, 2018
- Not a Chapter, but please read as it concerns the plans about the future of the storyAug 19, 2018
- Chapter 26Jun 29, 2017
- Chapter 25Jun 14, 2017
- Chapter 24Jun 6, 2017
- Chapter 23May 28, 2017
- Chapter 22May 16, 2017
- Chapter 21May 5, 2017
- Chapter 20Apr 27, 2017
- Chapter 19Apr 20, 2017
- Chapter 18Apr 18, 2017
- Chapter 17Apr 16, 2017
- Chapter 16Apr 14, 2017
- Chapter 15Apr 13, 2017
- Chapter 14Apr 11, 2017
- Chapter 13Apr 10, 2017
- Chapter 12Apr 8, 2017
- Chapter 11Apr 7, 2017
- Chapter 10Apr 6, 2017
- Chapter 9Apr 5, 2017
Reviews
No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!
Community Reviews(2)
- KuroYamiRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The story itself is interesting, although it needs a lot of work, the grammar specially, it needs to be a lot more readable for the readers. And the dialogs between characters seems a bit stiff to me. Lastly, improve on the characters themselves. Maybe I'll add more reviews when there are more chapters. Good luck.
- BlackfyreRoyal Road★ 1.0This is an interesting idea, but the story as whole is in desperate need of a proof readers or really even a basic spell checker. There really no excuse to not even use a basic spell checker, in some stories I could see that creating errors if you've made up some words for things but this has a lot of really sad errors.
I hope the author keeps working hard and improving and the world always needs more author but at the same time their personal beliefs digust me so even if they write other things I probably won't spend the time reading it. I wish you luck on improving your skills.