The Day I accidentally started the apocalypse but got an insane power
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Synopsis: Cody thorson was 17 he had an average build, average height and a Average personality but what made most girls fall for him instantly was his facial features his hair was pitch black, crimson red eyes and a Chiseled face, his facial features looked like they were sculpted by a master sculptor. You could imagine how many guys were jealous of him.
Cody was at an island hotel off the coast of California, when he went hiking with two friends at a mountain behind the hotel that for some reason was off limits.they found a cemetary up there what happened afterwards changed the world as we know it
ps: this is my first story, it is based off a dream i had on 5/14/2017 obviously some things might be different then the actual dream since some of the dream doesnt make sense. criticisim is apreciated and if you can tell me what to do better ill most certainly try
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- ben10codyj
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 24
- Views
- 4,269
Chapters(2 total)
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- MastersgtjamesRoyal Road★ 0.5Not rating this as at the moment it feels incomplete. (not all there)
The chapters are really short at the moment.
the font is waaay too big, most likely to make up for short chapters...
it does not work that way.
I would recommend rewrite to the author. Make the chapters longer, as in more content. Not larger Font. Also, go more in depth. right now it feels slapped on.