The Darkness In Your Mind
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Description
The darkness in your mind is a novel about a killer named Harold who meets his inevitable demise and says that if he had a second chance at life he "might" not be such a bad guy he is then reincarnated into a fantasy world without the memories of his past life and gains dark powers that are extremely strong, yet despite gaining these obviously evil powers that could be used in so many wrong ways, he stays true to his word from his past life, in his own ways.
Volume 3 will begin sometime in may since thats when summer vacation begins, so early may.
(This is also on webnovel, I have edited my description there so it says it is on this site.Here is the Webnovel link)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- Demon lord Kurai Shi
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- Rating
- 1.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 7
- Views
- 8,230
Chapters(35 total)
- V2 - Ch 22 Kurai, The Demon Lord of Darkness (End of volume 2)Apr 3, 2020
- V2 - Ch 21 A dream of a murderous boy named ?????? pt 5, End of origin arcMar 16, 2020
- V2 - Ch 20 A dream of a murderous boy named ?????? pt 4Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 19 A dream of a murderous boy named ?????? pt 3Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 18 A dream of a murderous boy named ?????? pt 2Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 17 A dream of a murderous boy named ?????? pt 1 (Beginning of origin arc)Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 16 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 8 (End of arc)Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 15 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 7Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 14 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 6Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 13 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 5Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 12 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 4Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 11 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 3Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 10 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 2Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 9 Humans vary, but most are weak pt 1Mar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 8 A village for the new lordMar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 7 Three demon lords and their plansMar 14, 2020
- V2 - Ch 6 A bamboozled builder's sonMar 13, 2020
- V2 - Ch 5 Rin Krad's school life beginsMar 13, 2020
- V2 - Ch 4 Human once againMar 13, 2020
- V2 - Ch 3 Awakening spell creationMar 13, 2020
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Community Reviews(1)
- numinorRoyal Road★★ 1.5It's isekai, it's wish fullfilment and I suppose you would drop it after prologue.
I'm sorry, but this is just bad.
I don't want to do advanced review, so here are just the things that stood out to me:
In the 5th paragraph of the prologue we have a 22 years time skip. Why even write a reincarnation isekai then? It's not just about teleportation, it's about a do-over too. No parents introduction, no premise, nothing about what he did in those 22 years, 22 years is a LOT of time. And we know nothing about what happened. It would make no difference if author wrote without reincarnation premise at all.
There is almost no description in the story. Oh here is a weapon shop, oh here is a adventure guild, oh here is lady, oh here is smth smth.
The dialogues are poorly structured and very unnatural, people don't speak like that.
There are no characters in the story. There are dolls. Murderhobo players in dnd give their PCs more spirit.