The Cursed Star

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Description

An existence that was revered, envied and despised, returned to the World of Gods, Monsters, and Devils. The World called The Origin was a mystery and his existence was just as mysterious.

"Without power, it is a Sin to exist. Without Friends and Allies, it is unwise to Rule. Without Love and Desire, it is a Wasted Life."

He had to uncover his own secrets if he wanted it all. And he wanted it all.

This is a Tale of Love, Emotions, and Commitments. It's a story as simple as Life.

WARNING: R18 content. The targeted audience is 18+.

The World is OP and MC is only weak in the start if you compare him to the People that surround him.

The Harem is part of the story. Don't read it if you don't like the concept.

The Warning Tags are not for show. Do consider them before reading the story that I am telling.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: FateDevilAce

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 191
Views: 86,502

Chapters(53 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

Dark CrowsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good world building ,good characters and a really interesting story this novel got all of it. So give it a try. I think that it will be worth it.
gadielwiggyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is well written, there is no doubt about that. some may find it a bit confusing because of the way Fate-D-Ace has chosen to write it, but you can very easily tell that it is because the authour wants his story to have a unique feel, and most definitely not because a lack of understanding of the english language.
overall the story is well written and has not recieved the rating it deserves.
CapTillonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It took a bit of getting used to for me to actually understand this story. The prose is a little confusing at times and there are certainly some phrases that don't make sense, but the vast majority of it is well written and flows nicely. Grammar wise, there are some mistakes, mostly in regards to sentence structure when he is writing the prose. I think it's mostly that he is trying a little too hard to write the prose that he loses some of the structure.
As the tag says, there is definitely some traumetizing content in this story that can easily be very disturbing to just about anyone. So you have been warned.
The story is mostly well done. There were times when I got a bit confused as to the scale of his world. There is no way to measure distance in the story. It's just that they travel to most places instantaneously. The only time he actually puts the distance of a place in any kind of perspective was when the MC and his group were traveling to the Sky Mountains. At first the had to break up their traveling because of what I believed to be a limit to how far the portals can reach, but when they almost reached the destination the MC just opened a portal all the way back to the Star Palace. I think the worldbuilding in general needs to be fleshed out just a little bit more. The rest of the story flows well in my opinion and the events make sense and have realistic consequences.
I find the characters to be pretty interesting. The MC is refreshing in that he is different from a lot of other MCs on this site, at least that I've read. My only problem with him is that his motivations seem a little unrealistic compared to what we know about him before his blood awakening. I know he recieved the bloodmemories of past morningstars but he still went from a nobody commoner to one of the rulers of the universe pretty much overnight. I will say that my only problem with the MC was in the beginning, later in the story I find his motivations pretty believable taking everything in
roarkindrakeRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I would seriously suggest a good free editing site being found because this story has great potenital. The phrasing on some words is just off and the flow for the first couple of chapters is rushed. The prologue he is a young boy and then the next mintue he is 21 in a magic college for 2m before being named lord of a planet. He also is marying 4 women at once. It's all doable and could work out perfectly but you skipped writing 10-20 chapters of foundation work. You have a great plotline and with a bit of rewrite/editing could become one of the top stories on the site. I hope you continue writing as it is so worth it!
hughfj08Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
It's a bit of a struggle to really get invested in the story.
There is little to no attempt at fleshing out any of the world.
Throughout the story you are thrown all sorts of things but none of them are explained or explored in any real depth.
As a reader you are dropped in a completely foreign world system and then left to flounder throughout while the MC jumps from scenario to situation adding more and more unexplained things.
ceallachRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
It is unfortunately obvious that the author's first langauge is not english. I've read many stories where that was so, but the tortured phraseology in this one is harder for me to accept while reading. It may be the random capitalization of words or labels. It could be the tortured sentences. The author may have a good story in them, but I can't read this one.