The Cult of the Fallen Sun

In a land of increasingly dark times, the prince of a human kingdom explores a drowned keep that might hold the secret to human survival.

This is a slow-paced dungeon crawler in a setting with soft magic, i.e. based on woe and narrative, without specific written-down rules.

Please note thatthis is a work in progress, even the title might change. I'm a non-native English speaker looking to improve my skills. From a technical perspective my goals with this story are as follows:

- To be able to write faux-olde-English as found in fantasy stories in an immersive way- To create a cohesive narrative with proactive characters- To improve my dialogue-writing so that characters are identifiable without being mentioned by name too often

I'm aware this might come off as too derivative from Tolkien-style fantasy. That is alright with me, I want to find a unique voice within. If you enjoy that sort of thing, well that's even better :)

Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated. I expect to update this at least biweekly. Do I mean twice a week or every two weeks? The answer isyes.