THE COSMIC WEAVER
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Dorian Dirac finds himself transmigrated into the body of Dorian Blackwood, an unawakened 16-year-old boy. As he rises to his new existence, he is thrust into a world pulsating with mana, where extraordinary abilities lie within individuals, and fiends lurk in the depths. But amidst the swirling forces of destiny, what mysteries will he unravel as he embraces his fated path?
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- GMKant
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 2,987
Chapters(9 total)
- Chapter 9 - Red Here, Red There, Red EverywhereJun 16, 2023
- Chapter 8 - Say My NameJun 16, 2023
- Chapter 7 - RedJun 15, 2023
- Chapter 6 - BathroomJun 15, 2023
- Chapter 5 - ManaJun 15, 2023
- Chapter 4 - FishingJun 15, 2023
- Chapter 3 - Deadly NapJun 15, 2023
- Chapter 2 - AwakeningJun 15, 2023
- Chapter 1 - Sacrifice(Prelude)Jun 15, 2023
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Community Reviews(1)
- ImtooaddictedtoreadingRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Grammar and diction are superb. However, the author is overtly descriptive at times in the first 3 chapters. That by itself is not an issue, and can even be considered good, however, when it is coupled with awkward writing - which exists in almost all introductions; It's just that other novels start off on a faster pace, making it less noticable - it only acts as a negative multiplier. Onwards from chapter 3, the story takes a sharp turn upward. The prose of the author works out perfectly by really bringing the events to life. Even simple acts such as fishing put you in the moment. It works out even better in fights. Dorian's first fight was honestly more exciting than most ability fights I've read, despite Dorian not having any special abilties for now. We get to see a lot of the thinking proccess of Dorian, who is portrayed as clever, cunning, and manipulative, yet also at times showing a very human side. There is virtually no plot holes(yet at least), as everything is logically based. Things that are mostly ignored in other novels, such as how memories merge when someone is transported into someone else's body, are explained. Knowledge doesn't suddenly appear out of thin air for Dorian. I'm hoping this extends to how mana and innate abilties work. The potential downside to all this is again too much descriptive langauge, but if the author can continue to blend world building with natural in novel events as they did from chapter 4-9, then it won't be an issue. They just need to rewrite the first 3 chapters, and better integrate the descriptiveness when writing a non-intense novel event, and this would be a 5.