The Conqueror's Sister

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Description

In a fantasy world with modern technology, a girl named Zaya Shyes struggles to find her place in the expansive world of interesting species, mystical magic, and forgotten mysteries. Her story begins with the birth of her brother, Curtis. Little does she know how unpredictable he will make her life as he drags Zaya along into his unpredictable and always maniacal schemes. With a genius little brother and a hidden power dwelling deep within, Zaya has to learn to conquer all of lives' twists.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: E. M. Kaustinen

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 2,815

Chapters(10 total)

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★★★★★ 4.5
I must say, I was almost immediately hooked onto the story with it’s opening because the author does a surprisingly good job of displaying the habits, mannerisms, emotional responses, and inner thoughts of the children. And I especially liked the author taking the time to acknowledge that the story’s protagonist, the sister to the younger brother who is a powerful mage, to actually have feelings of inadequacy and jealously to the situation.
And here we go, something that another reviewer pointed out. Chapter 5: My Life Before - Part 1, takes a massive PoV change. Thankfully, the author acknowledges this and leaves a note stating that this chapter is integral to the story without making the reader feel like they’re dumb for not following or understanding what’s happening. That being said, it is jarring nevertheless, and I didn’t feel that connection with the characters just yet to suddenly be thrust away from them.
In any case, it's a well-written, compelling story with a lot of potential. Excited to see where it goes!