The Compassionate Killer and his travels in a new world

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Allen Dreyar is the number one assasin in his world. Due to keeping this title yet not accepting any jobs for the last three years his colleagues were filled with so much envy that they decided to kill him off. But in his last breath Allen was able to lead his enemies inside his base of operations and bring them with him to the grave.

When he came to he was in another space which was completely white. He met a person calling himself god and told him he was needed in another world. Follow Allen as he reincarnates into another world with the same abilities he had along with some additional powerups.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Anglo-rico

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 173
Views: 58,644

Chapters(17 total)

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PiemantrRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Now to begin this review, I would like to state that I think the story itself is promising but the pacing is way too fast. One chapter, He meets female character. the next one, she falls in love with him. A few chapters later, there's already another one lined up for him. If you are going to introduce a harem, at least try to make it where the girls aren't just swooning as soon as they meet him.
As I see you are from the Phillipines, I would like to say that your grammar is a little inconsistant in the beginning chapters. I see that it is improving as you post more chapters so if you just keep it up, you should be fine.
I don't really like the style of how you present things, which kind of ties in with the pacing of the story. It's a little bit cluttered right now. You just need to space things out, take some time with the story, flesh out some of the characters that you intend to appear in later chapters. Also, don't start just killing off characters as soon as you introduce them, it really turns me away from the story.
I will update this review as you go on posting chapters. I hope this story will be something great. Just keep improving yourself as a writer.
A Reader,
Piemantr