The Clairvoyant
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Description
A science fiction adventure story that involves both spaceship battles and occult magic.
Set in the distant future where menkind has colonised dozens of worlds, humanity is still divided. Two large power blocks, Earth Sphere and the Free Planet Alliance have been involved in a hot and cold war for centuries and tension is rising with every passing day. Ray Chelsea seeks to escape from the endless conflict and attempts to join an organisation known as The Last Free Men, who hide in uncharted space. He crosses paths with a mysterious fortune teller, who warns him that no matter how hard he tries, he cannot escape the conflict, for he is part of it, it will chase him to the end of the universe. While Ray initially dismisses the warning, he soon finds that he indeed has no choice but to turn around and face the seemingly impossible struggle imposed on him.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- MindsArmor
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 1,368
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Cedric The Rabbit SlayerRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story follows a Hans Solo kind of character on the run from pursuers of yet unknown origins. You can expect futuristic settings, space stations, space ships, space battles, and probably more to follow.
Style: The setting is reminiscent of Star Wars. The plot moves along nicely though a bit slow. There are extensive descriptions of the environments which bring everything to life but drag on a bit longer than necessary.
Story: There’s a lot of potential here. At the moment, the story can either go the space adventure route or the fight against the evil empire route (or both). It remains to be seen, but overall, it’s interesting.
Grammar: Haven’t noticed any errors that would give me pause. The sentence structure is good and commas are where they should be.
Character: As I’ve mentioned in the beginning, he’s a Hans Solo kind of character. He’s on the run from something, though it remains to be developed. There may also be a prophecy surrounding him which will likely be expanded upon later.
Overall, if you enjoy Sci Fi, space battles, and/or the Star Wars series, then you’ll definitely enjoy this story. The plot is just getting started, but there’s plenty of potential present already.