The Chronicle of the Wolves [Halted]

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Kveldulf Einarsen, last of ancient and dishonored house, has come home to challenge a decree exiled his family centuries ago.

Summoned by his two closest friends and a compulsion to redeem his kin's sacred honor, Kveldulf now finds himself a founding member of a newly formed freelance mercenary company. Their first job seemed easy enough, find a bandit, capture him, his head preferably, and come back to collect the bounty.

If only things were ever simple ...

Before he knows better, Kveldulf will find himself embroiled in an effort to bring back the very monster who doomed his house centuries ago and may bring destruction to all he holds dear.

The White Horse is the first book in The Chronicle of The Wolves, with the first trilogy, The Song of Jeanne Marias (Blood and Stone, Terror in the Meadowlands, and While the Shepherd Sleeps) now being written.

This series is ongoing with a weekly schedule of Mondays and Fridays.

Also, most of the parts will be posted as rough drafts, though I'm currently going through each chapter to find typos and other mistakes to help tighten the work. And as you've probably noticed the numbering for episodes is disorganized to say the least.

As I'm revising and tweaking the books, I'll also be fixing those so they should be better organized over time.

Cover Credit: jenna_sklod

Link: https://fiverr.com/share/DgWB1a

Information

Status: Cancelled
Year: 2022
Author: TheMadProfessor

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Rating: 4.7/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

Tom Writing QuietlyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I could entirely believe that this story started out as a D&D campaign; it lives somewhere in that particular corner of the high fantasy mileu. Like many of the better D&D-esque novels, it's neither visibly wedded to the limitations of the D&D game system itself nor does it start with novice characters. Kveldulf and his companions are not beginners.
The story, for me, is the weak part at this point. There's a large and interesting cast of characters to introduce, and that's been handled in a way that feels a bit roughly paced. This is not to say that the story is bad, although it is very RPG-esque thus far; rather, it's a bit slow to engage because the time is spent more on introducing characters. (I may update this later once I get further - I think I am likely to read a few more chapters.)
There is a large and interesting cast of characters. I feel like I've gotten a fair sense of them, and there are some interesting interactions thus far.
Overall, the quality of the writing is pretty good. Chapters are initially posted as rough drafts and revised with feedback; this has not caught 100% of all grammatical issues, but most people will not notice any problems. Style is consistent and solid.
I like the way healing has been handled with the doctor character thus far. This is definitely not the way things are in D&D, which is good. The gore tag is a deserved one, there are some detailed descriptions of injury.
Eric VanderlipRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The Chronicle of the Wolves is the story of Kveldulf Einarsen, who after years of wandering as a sell-sword, has returned to his ancestral land to help two friends form their own mercenary company. Together, they'll stumble upon the efforts of an ancient enemy to finish a terrible conquest.
Style: The perspective is consistent and smooth. The pace is solid and exciting. My sole gripe is with how verbose the text can be. Some information is provided multiple times with different wording, which hurts the pacing. (Hopefully this review is out of date and a round of editing/condensing has elevated the story to its full potential.)
Story: Conversation and events flow naturally at a satisfying pace, driving the narrative along. The worldbuilding and lore is obviously deeply thought out. Overall excellent. (If I had one suggestion, it's that sometimes scenes lingers too long on emotional moments. This paradoxically weakens those by costing some reader interest.)
Grammar: Decent, but there are some issues. There are verbs with wrong tenses, relics from when sentences were reorganized. Also many incorrect or missing prepositions. Doesn't really affect readability.
Character: Great cast. Each characters has personality and a well laid out backstory. Interactions feel natural and engaging. Kveldulf makes a sympathetic and gripping protagonist. No complains.
Conclusion: Despite its issues, I recommend The Chronicle of the Wolves because of its solid core. The intriguing setting is fleshed out. The characters are compelling. The narrative is exciting and brisk. It's a fun read.
KinAkira1996Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The chronicles of the wolves follows Kveldulf Einarsen as the exile placed on his family centuries ago has ended, and he returns home. He joins a mercenary company eager to bring back honor to his family, but soon finds himself on a quest to take down the monster that caused the exile of his family.
Style (5/5): I enjoyed the prose in this story. Each chapter is layered with some great descriptions that highlight nuanced qualities about the world, the lore, and the characters around Kveldulf. The writing flows very well and the descriptions are quite in depth and paint vivid pictures.
Story (5/5): I enjoy the set up of the story and the premise is easy to understand. There is a clear goal in mind, but of course, there will be many obstacles along the way. How Kveldulf manages to overcome these trials is something that drew me into the story.
Grammar (4.5/5): There are a few grammatical mistakes that don't detract from the story, but are easy to spot within the first chapter itself. The author did make mention that the chapters are rough drafts so hopefully the small mistakes get ironed out.
Character (5/5): The characters are great. Kveldulf's relationships feel methodically planned out by the author and every interaction feels intentional, giving a lot of personality to the inhabitants of the world. I especially like how Kveldulf interacts with his friends and the banter between them feels natural.
I would highly recommend this book if you like slow burn fantasies that take time to develop the settings and character motivations.
TheScribeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A really fun start to an entertaining fantasy tale.
On style, it’s delightfully immersive. I like a patient pace, and it feels like this intentional choice to slowly build what seems to be a world with depth, history, and intrigue to explore. Some other reviewers have noted the work in progress nature of the story, but I have to commend the author for continuing to improve and iterate on their work. Already I can see that a lot of the feedback from other reviews has been remedied and the story much improved for it.
The characters are well-realised and relatable, with realistic behaviour, motivations, and reactions to the world around them. Most importantly, they’re fun, and the balance of dialogue, thought, and action brings them to life in a perfect way.
All of this works to empower the story itself, grounded in strong world-building, character, and style, but with a sense of slow-building progression that speaks to a strong, escalating build on the horizon.
The grammar is mostly excellent, nothing major to note.
Overall, a really entertaining read, and highly recommended for fans of the genre. Feels like a labour of love and I’m sure it will continue to be improved!
DabossUnberogenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Chronicle of the Wolves is one of the best pure fantasy novels that I have seen on this site. Generally my tastes run deep into the realm of LitRPG, but it is always nice to branch out a bit. Finding this book was definitely the right decision. It is sad to see the curse of a non main genre book afflicting this one, as it certainly deserves more than it has gotten in the line of exposure.
The style was clear, concise, and easy on the eyes. All of the paragraphs and dialogue weer well done, with actually properly spaced paragraphs rather than the single line madness that is so common on this site. It is nice to know that there are still people around with an attention span over a few seconds.
The grammar was perfect as far as I could tell. All of the errors that had been noticed by readers had been addressed.
The story was great, with masterful world building, and intriguing locales. The aspirations of the main character are relatable, and realistic, blending well with another aspect, the impeccable dialogue. The dialogue was as natural as it comes and the people sounded like real people. Sometimes stories suffer because of a lack of proper dialogue, but this one does not.
The characters were realistic, well crafted, and a joy to read.
Well done. If you've been considering this book, definitely check it out.
Lucian T. EinarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
**Overall:** The Chronicle of the Wolves is an interesting tale that immerses readers into a richly crafted world of fantasy. The depth of the narrative, coupled with meticulous attention to character dynamics, creates an engaging experience that beckons readers to journey alongside the protagonist, Kveldulf Einarsen.
**Style:** The author's writing style is a masterpiece, skillfully writing descriptions that vividly bring the world to life. The deliberate pacing, though a slow burn, contributes to the unfolding grandeur, reminiscent of classic fantasy tales. The commitment to refining the narrative is evident, with continuous improvements enhancing the overall immersive experience.
**Story:** From the exiled echoes of ancient houses to the formation of a mercenary company, the story flows with both elegance and intrigue. The deliberate progression allows readers to savor the complexities of each character and the unfolding plot. The promise of an ongoing series adds to the anticipation, promising a journey that transcends individual chapters.
**Grammar:** While minor grammatical hiccups exist, the commitment to refining the rough drafts signals a dedication to perfection. These nuances, however, do not detract significantly from the overall reading experience. The author's responsiveness to feedback indicates a commitment to delivering a polished final product.
**Character:** The characters are the heartbeat of this fantasy odyssey. Kveldulf Einarsen's journey, intertwined with a well-crafted ensemble, creates a tapestry of personalities that feel authentic and relatable. The camaraderie among the characters adds layers of depth, making the reader emotionally invested in their fates.
**Synopsys:** Kveldulf Einarsen, a last scion of a dishonored house, returns home to challenge a centuries-old decree. Joined by loyal friends, he becomes a founding member of a mercenary company, setting the stage for a journey filled with challenges, mystery, and the resurgence of an
M.G DriverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is one of the rare few novels in which the dialouge really hooked me, and that's out of quite a number of books.
The description of scenes and the way the words somehow flow into your mind really helps me FEEL like i'm in the scene, next to the port, crossing the Crimson Fields and seeing the bandit ambush. This is real good writing, and I'm definitely keeping some of the phrases and style of words being used.
Summary? Stop reading the reviews and jump right in, you won't regret it if you love the genre.
Style:
I note that the author has done a re-write, with clearer font at a larger size along with very descriptive text of the surroundings. This is a very good thing - much better than I can hope to achieve. Some readers might be put off by the elaborate showing of the environment, but it's a big plus in my book.
The reason why I cannot give a full five stars is because the format drastically changes after the rewritten chapters. I really think the author should continue the rewrite, though it might be a pain in the ass to do so. However there is clearly a diamond in the rough here, and I won't be surprised to see it do well in the future.
Story:
It is indeed a slow burn, I get the feeling of a drama shown on TV where the first few episodes are easy-going filler episodes slice of life. However, it ramps up fairly quickly, and our first big skirmish shows the peril and realistic danger of battle. Our main character doesn't come out unscathed, and this is yet another big plus in my mind - the author clearly shows dedication to his craft to ensure continuinty and logic.
Of course, there's magic, spells and sword-singing (which was described amazingly as well, by the way) which helps to enrich the story. Coupled with the little bits of world lore behind the statue, the Crimson Fields and the myths of legend, and you really get a taste of the flowing world the characters live in.
But why not 5/5? There's certain parts of the story I feel that was shoehorned in, espe
M.H. KadifichiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The adventure in this series is seriously riveting. As I read through the chapters, I was eager to say what other adventures would come. There was danger and excitement and I cant wait till I read more.
Style
The storytelling is really engaging. You can feel the world come to life through the words on the page. The pacing of the book is great, finding the balance of quick action paced but enough time for the reader to digest adventures that took place. The descriptions are vivid and really paint a picture of the scene.
Story
The concept itself is great, it lends from some tropes but turns them into a twist changing it to a refreshing change from what we’ve come to expect. The narrative is structured well and I like the dialogue.
Grammar
Grammar is great, there are some small alterations that could be made but they are very subtle and do not detract any from the story.
Character
Kveldulg is a great character with a great backstory. What I love is that the backstory isn’t just created to build history, but really to show why the character is the way that they are. The supporting characters are also well built and you can tell they are each different.
Makoto NagaiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This was good. Very good.
The style was fantastic something that gave so much depth to the writing, never missing a detail of importance but not dragging in too much description at the same time. The writing flowed quite well from page to page. Amazing style.
For story I'll go out and say it that it's up my alley. Though it takes some time too set up when it gets going the ball starts too roll and it's intriguing to read. The dark sort of medieval themes is something that I think was done very well.
Grammer had some hiccups and the lack of spacing made it sometimes hard to keep track of where I was but was not enough to take away from the story. Honestly though the Grammer errors were quite rare. All in all very good.
The characters well very well flushed out, something I appreciated a ton. A lot of books completely skim over characters and just focus on the plot which to me feels plain and stale, but the author here really put in the effort to give depth to his characters.
Overall a awesome work and I highly suggest it if your a fan of D&D. Great work.
Luca DRRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Immediately fromt the first chapter, the slow start of this novel helps to give a sense of the scope of the world. Songs, rhymes, plaques under the statues... little details that add a lot to a story. It's not the usual action packed adventure, but something different, that I really enjoyed. The deep worldbuilding goes from the names to the rhymes, and adds a lot to the story. However, this is where we move on to the next point, which is a little less solid.
Some of the description can appear a bit heavy on the eyes, the reason being - in my opinion - the fact that the author uses too many times the word 'as'. Let me set an example: "His muscular build conveyed a sense of great strength and noble bearing as he looked out over the sea with crystal blue eyes as a smile crossed his face."
See what I mean? This can be worked out to be a bit more flowy, less heavy on the reader. But it's just a minor thing, mind you. Beside that, there are some minor word misuses, like using "then" instead of "than", but they do not take away from the story.
The story and the overall narration pick up roughly halfway through chapter one. The prose becomes much less 'constipated', I would say, and the dialogue really helps the story along. I won't say much about the plot or characters to avoid spoilers, but we are presented with old friends that have well-built dynamics between them that are a delight to explore. The story picks up as well, giving us the first hints of what's to come. By the time the second chapter rolls about, I can confidently say that most of my criticism for this story kinda dissipated. The author plays more to their strangths here, and it shows.
Overall a pleasant read. However, one last small detail. I recommend overriding the font for the reader. I found the author's choice of fonts a bit difficult to read and was happy to discover that RR can override them. Sorry author, better to use tried and proven fonts next time!