The Chosen: Colossus of Evil

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Description

For all beings are the paths of fate carved, but for three dark elven children did the loss of their parents put their fates in clear unwanted view. Being murdered by a wizard in the body of a beastly Minotuar, this brutal unscrupulous terror was bent on ruthless backlash to all in the realm for his own dark suffering past.

Through the aging course of fifteen years, being both guided and protected by their new guardian uncle did the children’s mission finally start. Forced for their own safety from all they knew they leave their home that was fashioned in a world under the world. Their clan was nothing more than a rebel shadow of their old race, driven into hiding from persecution and disloyalty of not willing to uphold the continuing evil traditions of their ancestral nature; and with struggles unseen they fight to emerge from the shadows to the surface realm, with a final goal to one day be again equal both in sociological weight and rank.

Accomplishing such tasks held its risks; for the three on their endeavor discover the complications of sibling rivalry, loyalty and personal acceptance. Unexpectedly do they find trials of the body, mind and soul with allied companions along their journey, that introduce them to truth, love and self sacrifice when stories of their own past intertwined with theirs.

Will such tasks lead the children to the same doom that brought them to this very dark alley; or strengthen their resolve through the sight of true purpose not only to defeat their mortal enemy, but defend their continuing wished existence within the realm.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Colossus

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KaylaBusWhyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Never have I read a Prologue that is as intriguing as this one. And I have read quite a few dragonlance, sword of truth novels, etc.. There is just something about the way the author has portrayed his characters and depicted a battle scene. He got right into the heart of the character and as you are reading you are seeing through that Character's particular eyes. I know I have only read the prologue to start with, but I am just wowed at the author's sense of emotion and detail he has with the characters. Once I am home from work I will continue on with story. Looking forward to see if the other chapters posted continue with the same emotion and details. I am absolutely in love with this Author's writing style and it says soo much about an author when he/she is not afraid to capitalize on detail and description.
TerriblyVileRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I am moved to tears because fictions of this quality are disappearing on royal road.
its amazing release schedule allows me to keep reading when I probably should be sleeping and each chapter is like 50 pages so you get lost in a chapter.
this is one of those fictions that will take you into the story. there is so much content I could probably do a lecture on this.
also, the plot is deep to the point where you discover new things about the characters every chapter plus the level of complexity that is used in this fiction could make many professional writers turn to shame. there is so much content I could make a 4-hour long lecture on it!
randompeepsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is so deep and interesting! I love it! The prologue is quite unique, as I've never seen anything else like it before. So I thank you for creating something that peaks my interest. You definitely need to continue and never drop this until it's finished!
There's just one issue I have. The grammar. It's okay if you do a few mistakes here and there, but I get irritated when someone makes the same exact mistakes, over and over. Maybe you should get a proof-reader? Well, anyhow, besides that minor thing, everything else is perfect! Continue the great work.