The Children of Destiny

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Description

Steam punk/ high fantasy

In a world where you need to get famous to get magical, a dying avenger and a naive noble merge into a whole one fateful night. The storm which brings them together is just a prelude to the gale which will blow throughout the Empire. Our protagonist Cyn Pavone must come to terms with the conflict within in order to merge with the very society that eradicated his clan and gain enough power to unleash his vengeance.

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World Mapshowing the North pole

World Mapshowing the mortal continent

Themes: Spoiler

Overarching theme- revenge saga

Focus- character based progress

style- multiple povs

action- strategic battles

Baronet (Village head. Population- 100-400)

Baron (City Mayor Population- 10,000-30,000) --- can appoint iron Knights=Baronet (1/10 of no of villages)

Viscount ( District leader- ~10 cities) --- can appoint 1 copper Knight = Baron and 10 iron knights

Earl (Zone- ~10 districts) --- can appoint 1 silver knight = Viscount and 10 copper and 100 iron knights

Marquis (state) --- can appoint 1 gold knight = Earl and 10 100 and 1000 silver copper iron respectively

4 Dukes (7 states each)--- can appoint 1 platinum knight = Marquis and as above for the other knights

King (Regiis III) --- Kingsguard. 1 Knight Command = Duke and as above for the rest

Captain (10 martial warriors) = A rank mercenary = Baronet

General (10 Captains) = S rank = Baron

Lieutenant Commander (10 Generals) = SS rank = Viscount

Commander (10 Lieutenants) = SSS rank (max)= Earl

Marshal (10 Commanders) = Marquis = Guild branch leader for a nation

Master of War(10 Marshals) = Duke = Guild leader of the Yohei

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
YesorNo

Tags

FANTASYMAGICPSYCHOLOGICALMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSSTRATEGY

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Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
41
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23,459

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • IReadBooksForALivingRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I think the story has a lot of potential from what I've read so far.
    There are a few minor things that I don't like but they're mainly my preferences towards things. The grammar's fine, if not good, and the style of the writing is smooth.
    The plot seems to have a lot of potential and has some good foundation made in the 11 chapters currently out.
    And finally the characters are all fleshed out as much as 11 chapters can do, the only thing that annoys me is that the main character can't seem to accept the fact that he's got the memories of two people but at the same time it's completely understandable and will allow for a lot of character development.
  • Wolf PupRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This story is very interesting with a lot of plot twists and it makes you wonder where things are heading. Will the MC straighten out his relationship with the concubine?? Will the clan chief get his revenge through the MC?? Will the MC ever be able to become a mage??
  • MelcontentRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    First of all the story is very vivid and there are no grammar mistakes that I can see. I have only read up to chapter five so this review might not be the best to consider.
    If you like Dungeon Maddess you will probably like this project.
    The main problem that I have with it is that the book feels like an instruction manual. A lot of technical aspects about the magical system and explanations. The character backstories are just sort of thrown at the reader early on and I would have liked them and mystery around the characters better spaced out.
    There is a sex scene in it but I wouldn't give it any points. A bit mechanical and I think that story could have been the same without it.
    This is my personal opinion and you might argue with it.
  • tactRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    first of all change summery it made me stay away until i give it a pity read due to seeing a writer like you trying to chage story to litRPG just to gain attension
    dont add lit rpg if you are not comfortable or thing it will ruin story in any way then to review
    charater it is good that you flash out charater it is probaly best thing of story
    the MC is a little less shown in favor of other which is ok but do give some pov of MC more
    world building is lacking but we have just started the story and most time is spent on charater so we can wait
    story seem to be good and intresting every chapter leaving you want to know what going to happen next
    your style if fine make it fun to read in multiple POVs
    i am happy i give it a read,