The Cemetery of Gods and Devils

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Status

Hiatus

Author

Slothicous

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• tartarvgheRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  like it all but slow outdate faster !!!!!!!!!
• fraulcruzRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Love the concept of his wish! Great work and more updates!! :D
• ZororoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Even though the grammar isn't the best the story is amazing. Im loving this so please dont be like other authors that drop at chapter 3-5
• abaraxRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Even though it's one of the most overused topics (apocalypse + OP MC) you managed to create a unique story. Not to mention the unique way to get OP by breathing. There may be some problems with grammar but nothing to the extent of being problematic. Also it would be great if you would update more frequently.
• Nah AvaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  slothicus once again comes forth and writes a new great story that’s fun to read  but some grammar errors in the first chapters most likely will be fixed
• wraith26Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  this kind of novel is what im looking for... overpoweered but enjoyable..
• Book CultivatorRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  This is my personal review
  Style Parameter:
  I like how every different author writes their stories. A style is unique to everyone ( ALMOST UNIQUE ), so there is nothing too much to tell about it, just that you lost some points on it because your bad grammar is inlaid in your style.
  UPDATE:
  NOTHING CHANGED HERE!
  Rating:  3.5
  Story Parameter:
  The story is pretty enjoyable, but nothing that set it out of its peers, every apocalypse story is pretty the same thing, but you have a point with the creativity of comical powers.
  UPDATE:
  A less "generalized" story, keep working hard.
  Rating:  4
  Grammar Parameter:
  Bad… Just this… Bad… Too many errors to count… But I have to say: “We won’t be counting ERRORS, we will be counting stars!!!”
  UPDATE:
  The grammar is considerably better!
  Rating:  3
  Character Parameter:
  The same “I HAVE TO BE THE STRONGEST TO SAVE WHO I LOVE FROM THESE DAMN ZOMBIES”, type of character.
  UPDATE:
  The character is considerably better!
  Rating:  3.5
  Overall Score Calculation:
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  ( 3.5[Style]  +  4.0[Story]  +  3.0[Grammar] +  3.5[Character])  /  4  =  3.5
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• Forgiv3n324Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Style is nothing unique borderline standardized honestly, but not bad either so 4/5
  Story has the over used apocalypse setting with nothing really unique other than his unique way of being OP as fuck, but the setting is overused because it is entertaining none the less.
  Grammar is by far your weak link you clearly do not understand the subtleties of English. For example, Has & have you use those two wrongly so many times that I feel like when you need to use one or the other you guess which one would be correct and hope it was cause you do use it correctly SOMETIMES, which leads me to that your guessing cause you wouldn't get it right one paragraph then wrong the second time. An example as to how to use the two is: I have to use the restroom or He has the camera (Normally Have is used alongside I and has is normally used when your speaking about something else or someone else having to do a task (again I say NORMALLY cause I just used have while speaking of something else... yea confusing ik... english is a bitch sometimes)
  Character... Honestly I went with the middle ground because honestly theres only one character and that in itself is... well... lame? I guess, but it's only four chapters in so obviously someone else will be introduced, but the mc seems to be a little dim witted which bugs me. ( An example *this is also bad on your part* he just got over 1000 str so he gets an award... and there were two really great items at the start and then the third option you give a DAGGER... A DAGGER from getting STR up this isnt the agility rank up come on now you should since there are three item options when he gets 1k+ on a stat you should give 1 Armour peice, 1 Weapon, and 1 Accessory that goes with said stat for ex. Wisdom: Gives a mages robe, a staff, and ear rings) ANYWAYS I went way off track but the guy in the end wasted his str items getting a flipping dagger and his reasoning was the invisibility to get away from enemies if need be, but invisibility only MIGHT
• AxelordRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Style: Annoying and incomplete in places. Run-on sentences everywhere, over-zealous on repeating Subjects rather than finding alternatives/using pronouns.
  I hate fully-centered texts; not everything is an announcement!
  Setting/story: Simple, straight to the point, and possibly hilarious in the long run.
  Possibly.
  Grammar: Mid-tier. Workable.
  Some issues with the tense jumping from present to past sometimes (tip: titles are either impersonal present tense or past tense).
  Sometime has a bit of a runaway sentence problem. Subjects are over-repeated in some places instead of being replaced by alternatives/pronouns. Has the habit of using breath/breathe/breaths/breathes interchangeably, oft in the wrong place.
  Characters are straightforward and rely on archetypes. Since the story seems to be made as to not waste one bit of a reader’s time: it’s fine.
  In all, funny-ish high speed/low drag story. Would no recommend on the account that it’s a pain to read.
• FaerNCRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  MY EYES!!! OH MY GOD MY EYES!!!!
  But seriously, it started bad, but I thought it could get better, but it only gets worse.
  Chapter 4, I don't even know how to fix it, I don't even understand what some of it is saying.