The Bride of the Sun

Self-Published

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Description

Mithra and her Sword's Sister seek help. She will find it on the Beggar's Hill among those who secretly govern upon people that are poor, sick, and in need. The so-called Beggar's Princes will answer her call, and while Mithra does not fear them, she is unaware of who they really are. And yet, Mithra is ready for anything. Determined to see it through, she will marches on without knowing that the help she will get may be much more of what she can repay.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
flama87

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYANTI-HERO LEADFEMALE LEADTRAGEDYSTRONG LEADLOW FANTASYREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYGRIMDARKMYTHOS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
5.0/ 5.0
Followers
3
Views
2,798

Chapters(5 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • ScruffedUpRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    -Really Early review here, so a few of the sub-ranks are auto-5's as I haven't found any issues yet and it's too early in some cases to really judge the story, so I will review as fairly as I can with what I have. -
    -Grammar Score
    Grammar is good, I haven't noticed any glaring issues grammatically, hell I haven't seen a single typo yet, so if there are any I missed it. 5/5 grammar
    -Story Score / Style Score
    Story premise is unique, new world, new gods, new culture, and as such I can't really say anything here as with there only being 3 chapters I don't really have anything to review here. I will put a 5 star because I don't have anything to complain about yet, and I will come back after another 10 or so chapters and re-review this part.
    Either way, building a world from the ground up in another universe with a different culture always shows a lot of creativity, as it is really easy to just place a story in a different version of our own world, it becomes difficult when you need to create a whole new one.
    -Character Score
    Characters feel alive, they have their personalities in tact and don't read like robots doing what the plot demands (so far) so I am happy with them. Once again, really early in the story so I don't have much to judge here.
    I don't normally read books with a female lead, because most books with a FML tend to be of different genres that I don't read all that often.
    However you asked for a review and I am always happy to see the things new writers are cooking up,
    As stated before, I will return after a few more chapters are written and the story progresses further than 3 chapters.