The Boy Slain By Coffee

Self-Published

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Description

"Welcome to Sergard the world of fantasy. Looks like your old god spilt his coffee on your soul which in turn killed you, but you know he's a god and he could fix it. So to save you he sent you to this world. We hope you enjoy your stay and try not to die that fast. Oh, you probably noticed that we brought your whole house to this world with you, you're welcome."

The smell of burnt bacon filled his nose as he looked at the floating box in front of his face.

James' head was racing as he was trying to comprehend what was actually going. The only thought that could escape and be converted into speech was the unintelligent yell of "GOD SPILT HIS COFFEE AND KILLED ME, WHAT THE FOOK!!"

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
DireTric

Tags

LITRPGACTIONADVENTUREMAGIC

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
7
Views
3,209

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Andy2cRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    No loli goddess that eternally falls in love with the mc with only just a glance, none usually mistaken belief that clichè equals comedy/character/plot development and the mc even promised he wouldn't get a harem!! Just for those 3 reasons I was tempted to give this story, except for grammar, full 5/5 marks XD
    Unfortunatly there are only a couple of chapters so far, so this review can't be all that accurate or exhaustive. These few chapters, though, are still enough to get a taste of the author's refreshing comedy and interesting ideas.
    It's really too soon to talk about the story as with only 3 chapters so far (at the time of this review), we know just a bit more than what was said in the synopsis, having the high score relying on blind faith brought by how fun those chapters were XD
    The author could use the help of an editor, as there are some grammatical errors/typos here and there, but not so many or severe to hinder the reading experience.
    As of now we have only seen the mc but he was nicely flashed out, having, once he got past the comedy moments, believable reactions and feelings.
    That said, give it a chance! :)