The Blood Born Magus

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Had a story idea, and took a break from editing my current story to quickly jot it down.Ifpeople like it, ill put out chapters occasionally (maybe 1-2 a week? idk, we will see)

Im not good at the synopsis stuff, so Ill cut out the fluff and BS by just giving an overview of current plan.  (probably fix this up later as well)

Magic/fantasy world with Magus' at the apex of power.

Magus are created through the enlightenment of... something(?) and it allows them to channel mana through that enlightenment.  (ex: find enlightenment in fire = become fire mage)  Finding enlightenment is exceedingly rare, and almost never happens, but when someone is enlightened they can pass the power down to their decendants, with a generational deterioration.

This really only affects... skill/training/power-gaining proficiency?  I'll likely be putting in a power/progression system, but as of writing the prologue, i havent flushed it out (lol) I'll be putting some thought into it before i do anything though.

Use title to draw other conclusions

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Idlefiber

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
202
Views
12,548

Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • EverShadowRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Dang, this is a fantastic start. A very compelling prolouge, an interesting setting both in magic and politics, as well as a mysterious main character. It's just the first couple chapters so I'm not going to do an in depth review yet, but I'm really looking forward to this story.
  • njt07Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Great start to a new story. It does have a large gap that needs to be explained in some manner, but I assume this is already planned for.
    Will update as as the story progresses.
  • ChayimRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Interested to see where this work in progress goes!
  • LightningShadow7Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Its interesting but the 2nd chapter completely lost me I have no idea exactly what is happening. I dunno if that's just me or if other people are also confused. I might change the score once I get what is happening exactly.