The Black Spot
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Description
This story is dropped!
Jem expected the black spot to be his one-way ticket to an early grave and to the early end of his university career, instead, it's a ticket to a whole new life. This time the parents aren't abusive, but they sure are a whole lot more likely to get him killed.
If he can survive all of his adoptive family's hair-brained schemes then dealing with the black spot once and for all can't be that hard.
Right?
Well, Jem sure hopes so, he'll have to go back to university (sober) for this.
Join Jem on the adventure that is his wacky new life, let's just hope he can make it through it without his vice (alcohol) & his virtue (his (original) legs).
Gods, why can't anything make sense?
The Black Spot is a progression-centric story with LitRPG elements.
Main things to know before you go in:- I know the legs line makes it sound like mc may be disabled, just different legs I'm afraid
-There are queer characters in here, if that’s a dealbreaker for you probably don’t start reading I guess.
-This story is going for lighthearted and fun. It by design isn’t a super serious story where we can expect bad things to keep happening to the characters. They aren’t devoid of consequences, nor are they free from sadness, but don’t go in anticipating long marches of trauma and depression.
-Not certain of the exact tags that are going to stick? Some may be more appropriate at certain times than others. (will try to make sure they are relevant) (I may also be technically being more cautious with the CW tags than strictly necessary, but everyone has different thresholds for stuff and wanted to be on the safe side)
-Don't assume pirates, I mean I know the name is what it is but I don't even know if we'll see pirates yet
~ Enjoy
Honestly, this is a bit of an afterthought, but if you can try to keep criticism constructive. If you just don’t like something that is what it is, but if you feel like the way something is done is bad and are hoping that the approach might be modified going forward then civil comments are a lot easier to properly engage with ^_^
On Hiatus?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- AdiAdiAdiAdi
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 52
- Views
- 20,087
Chapters(32 total)
- Ch 32 - Facepalms and FaceplantsJun 15, 2023
- Ch 31 - Healing Comes at a PriceJun 6, 2023
- Ch 30 - Decisions and RepercussionsMay 30, 2023
- Ch 29 - My Kingdom for a Cottagecore Alchemy ShopMay 23, 2023
- Ch 28 - Don't Just Leave the Door Wide OpenMay 15, 2023
- Ch 27 - And They Were RoommatesMay 12, 2023
- Ch 26 - Blood Locks and a Rusty OctopusMay 8, 2023
- Ch 25 - Bronson BerkleyMay 5, 2023
- Ch 24 - Bones Don’t Mend That WayMay 1, 2023
- Ch 23 - Pondering Orbs, Stars (and Murder)Apr 29, 2023
- Ch 22 - Still Unable to Fight an Overgrown Lizard (trial 3/3)Apr 28, 2023
- Ch 21 - Shifting Mentality (trial pt 2)Apr 26, 2023
- Ch 20 - The Invigilator (trial pt 1)Apr 24, 2023
- Ch 19 - How hard can it be?Apr 23, 2023
- Ch 18 - Levelling upApr 21, 2023
- Ch 17 - You Can’t Fight an Overgrown LizardApr 20, 2023
- Ch 16 - Sweet!Apr 19, 2023
- Ch 15 - Aoife - Mother Knows BestApr 18, 2023
- Ch 14 - IncanfatuatedApr 16, 2023
- Ch 13 - Flair for the DramaticApr 15, 2023
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Community Reviews(1)
- xXSB101XxRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The brief tldr of the story is a bisexual man gets transported to another land where he is taken in and helped to train and improve his classes and skills in order to hopefully fix his condition.
The main objective issue with the story is the grammer issues that are throughout, usually a handful per chapter. They can range from anything between mispelled words, incorrect words, missing punctuation or commas, and sometimes some weird sentence structure. There was also instances in chapters 10 to 12 where there was this conversation between a handful of people and there was no way to really tell who was talked during those moments as it was just lines with no extra detail.
The more subjective issue is I'm not sure if there is anything to grabby about the story that makes me excited to continue to read. The only thing of real note is the pro LGBT slant the world has, but if you aren't purposely looking for that, than I don't know what is really interesting about this. I think my main personal issue is the fact there has been a decent chunk of time skips in this story to keep in the "high notes" so to speak as opposed to spending time having the main character become acclimated to the world. This has led to me not really being attached to the world he's in at all.
I'll wait and see if this story continues, assuming it doesn't go on hiatus, and will make an update in the future.
Word count 78,717 words