The biting cold
Self-Published
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Description
20 years have passed since Adrian was sent to the top of this hellish mountain.
The biting cold stained his being a dead blue, seeping into his soul.
His embers have died within the first 20 levels of the great frozen realm of Zianforz.
And here he finally was at the bottom of it. He still remembers the childish thought that got him into this mess.
‘Oh?! Being transported into another world??! Oh, this is going to be sick! I want to be an ageless war machine!’
How foolish was he, to think that power is so easily given.
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- jokie
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 13
- Views
- 982
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- runedwarf111Royal Road★★★ 3.0I very much enjoy the plot of the story so far. the main character while being OP has flaws that help give him more flavor. other than some grammar issues my only critique is that the story seems to be a bit to fast for me. you went from him arriving at a town to a POV shift to the town's ruler and then back to the MC who immediately had a huge lore dump. I suggest giving over more chapters to more slice of life chapters, such as the POV of a random villager who sees the MC walk by their house outside and ect. other than that good work.