The Bit of Human Left

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Description

Arris Graham is a regular college student, attending a high ranking college in California. It's summer break, and Arris is returning home to visit his relatives and pay homage to his deceased parents at their graves. Little does he know, the entire world is about to change.

When Arris goes out to visit his parent's graves, he's caught in the middle of a thunderstorm. He continues on through the thunderstorm to pay his respects to his parents but is interrupted by some disturbing texts from his cousin. Arris tries to leave the graveyard, but before he can get to his car he is confronted by a screen which appears in mid-air before him, reading, "InitializingWorld Serverstart", with an ominous countdown just below those words.

Just as the server is about to initialize though, Arris is struck by an enhanced bolt of lightning, and the very flesh melted off him. When he comes to after theSystemhas initialized, Arris finds himself in the body of a skeleton, stuck in the dungeon, with no way out for another 6 months. How will Arris navigate this new world?

Cover by David Corry

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Threetails

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 949
Views: 140,891

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

AiferRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A very good story, though it has begun a little slow it's starting to pick up the pace. I like it, and hope that it will continue.
The character is well put together, the world and dungeon systems seem robust enugh for the setting.
DryederRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Yeah why not. Actually pretty good. but i do have my sense of taste for books tainted by reading so much of the same thing over and over again. i just hope the main crarecter turns out morally questionable.
Hyperion915Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
(as of chapter 6 [or 7 if the prologue counts as chapter 1])
your story reminds me of others like randidly ghostound, new world, and all the rest but the focus and effort youve put into what you have so far has produced a story of much higher quality than the rest. youve had arris do little more than fight but his growth is much more tangible and the solitude he experiences is much better executed. his character is more thoroughly explored and i am more engaged here than any other comparable story. not trying to rag on the others mods, but author you really have a grasp on writing this stuff. i look forward to more, and i hope youll continue this story as well
JAGRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i'm not realy good at reviewing nor am i an expert on literature so this is completly opinionated.
but i think this story is really good the only reason i don't really pay attention tp grammar and style. cause my english is pretty bad so even if i found a mistake i'll just assume i was the on making a mistake (as in it me thinking there being a mistake is just me being unable to properly read english). so you shouldn't pay attention to those (only set them on 5 cause if i left them at 0 it would leave a bid impression for thos who are like me only watching the score and not careing about the review it self). but i think the story and character (at the time i'm makeing this review chapter 7 is the latest chapter). are intressting and if it continues being as good as it is now i'm pretty certain it will be able to stay as one of the story's whom's update's i will look forward to everyday (unlike some of the story's in mij favorites and bookmarked list that are only there because i was too lazy to delete them).
ScandalfRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I don't like writing a review so early on but I feel like the amount of attention this novel is getting is not enough at all, considering its quality. So I thought I should write a positive review.
So right from the beginning, this novel got all my attention and made me look forward to what is going to happen next. The amount of details author gives us is enough to let us know exactly what happened but not too much that we'll get bored halfway through the action or situation. Main character is written very realistically, as he is indeed acting like what an average human being would act like. He also has his own past, which actually effects his current actions so he is not some generic character stuck in the 2nd dimension. Action is also written well enough. At least it won't make you go "Oh c'mon, how is that possible, that makes no sense". Main character, outside of fights, makes some questionable decisions (though only at the beginning, since he becomes used to the situation and gets out of that panic mode fast enough to not annoy you) and I actually asked about this in the comments and author answered me saying he based the MC of himself and he himself is a very family oriented guy so whenever something bad happens he always gets help from his family, thus he made it so that MC acted like that, trying to find his family first even though he should've first realized that it was impossible for him to find his family for at least 6 months. And although I didn't like it when MC acted a bit stupid there, after I read authors reply, I thought that made sense and now I am glad he wrote it like this because it makes it more relatable.
Anyway if you are debating on whether to read this or not, I'd say read this. You will most likely love it, and you definitely won't regret it even if you don't like it
kauntykikiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really like what you have so far. It seems well put together and there is plenty of detail. I like that because I hate characters where nothing is explained. I like to get to know them. It makes the character feel more relateable. Keep it up, you are doing great.
nickitolasRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Relatively decent as of chapter 3. Will update and actually review once I'm up to date.