The Billboard

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Description

Getting home in one piece to have a drink with your friends is a good thing. Figuring out how to make the design of a corn research shed interesting while getting there is even better. Especially when your studio professor is out to get you!

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Status
Completed
Year
2023
Author
----EMMM----

Tags

ACTIONCOMEDYSLICE OF LIFESHORT STORYCONTEMPORARY

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Rating
1.0/ 5.0
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1
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223

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  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    The entire piece is a wall of text that lacks the structure and form to make this readable. Comma splice to comma splice, description after description. I did not feel that it was a comedy at all and had the sense of disorienting rambling. The piece could be improved significantly by having it not be a giant run on sentence but in all the description of this blinding race, it still struggles with what seems to be an unreliable and exaggeration prone narrator.