The/Beginning [ONESHOT]
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Description
A short tale, serving as a Prelude, an Alpha of Days, The Beginning of All Beginnings...
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- D.K.U
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- Rating
- 1.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 380
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0This reads like some sort of poem for a creation story, but it doesn't have an obvious structure or pacing to me. The way this plays out is semi-religious in tone and yet there is no grounding or context to discern it. Without a solid understanding this just becomes vague ideas that have no meaning on the reader. It is interesting, but without something further it is difficult to evaluate this piece.