The Beginning After the End - a More Experienced Hero

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Everyone knows the story of the great Arthur Leywin, the protagonist of "The Beginning After the End", after being a king of a technological world like ours, known as Grey, he ends up being reborn in a world where there is magic, and technology is at the medieval level.

But what if there was another person reborn in that world? Someone who isn't just going through 2 lives, like Arthur/Grey, but so many, that its actual age may be greater than or equivalent to that of deities found in this fantasy world?

Well, that person will turn out to be one cursed to forever suffer these rebirths. But will this curse ever end? Come read, and find out, whether this cursed addition will make the fate of those in this world easier or more difficult.

DISCLAIMER:"The Beginning After the End" isn't my creation. TBATE is owned by a writer named TurtleMe. This is only a fanfiction having some Original Characters as another Main Characters in the story. There also can have another OCs or characters from other series just for adding comedy moments to balance with the serious events.

{A/N:This fanfic is part of a series of fanfics that I named as "a More Experienced", you dont need to read one to understand the other, so dont be afraid of this.}

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: SleepyWalkerYN

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Rating: 2.2/ 5.0
Followers: 36
Views: 60,394

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HHexRoyal Road
★ 0.5
When I saw the premise for this story I thought it would be interesting, but I was disappointed.
The premise is that after being reincarnated something like 11,000 times the MC reincarnates into Arthur's world and getsadopted alongside him. The interesting part of the story would be seeing how this involvement changes the story and how Luz(MC)'s 11,000 lives have affected his mindset, experience, and ability. Instead, we just see the same plot progression as in TBATE, with Luz added in to every seen for a few people to praise for being slightly better than Arthur. At one point he literlly decides not to get stronger in order to not leave the Arthur behind. This felt like a cheap way of nerfing him after realizaing that he was too powerful rather than an good In-character decision. We do not see his 11,000 lives of experience anywhere, we only see that he is a bit better at magic and combat than Arthur. At one point he literally complains that through his 11,000 lives he has never gotten good with money. Almost none of the skill that he should have gained from these lives is ever shown, if he had just 2 other reincarnations it would be just as believable.
All that ends up happening is ultimately the same events resolve, with Luz making them end slightly differently, slightly differently in that they talk about him a bit but the actual result is the same.
It feels like the author is afraid to make changes to the plot and just wants to shove his fancy character with all these cool qualities (WOW 11000 lives) into the story without affecting the story in any significant way.