The Beggar and the Young Mistress
Self-Published
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Description
An average quality oneshot about a young mistress who is saved by a 'beggar'. It is short in length but I wanted to post it anyway. It's around 2k words.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Erkaloth
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 484
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5OP char stumbles across a kidnapping and saves the girl. The setting is referenced to have some plot holes and how the interactions play out, even if this is just a random encounter, it does not make any logical sense. The prose is fine, though the red text for dialogue is a little strange. My issue comes with how the interactions play out very unnaturally, it just doesn't feel right.