The Beast of Merryfare
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The mist flowed around the forest, around great trees and vines, spinning a spider web of vapour inside the dark forest.When he realised it, he was already deep into the middle of the lifeless forest.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- hildetaylor03
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 218
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 2.5This has the classic hallmarks of a good horror story, but it is a bit rushed in its depiction. It is too short to really capture the feeling of isolation, of unease and the monster itself is a little awkward because of it. The whole conclusion and follow up aspects feel like the detract from the story, not add to it.